| Title: Chapter 14- In Control
| 02 Nov 2008 3:17 am
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| Reviewer: Muggle49 (Anonymous)
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Wonderful job, very unique read. Thanks for sharing with us.
Author's Response: thank you, it's hard to be original, but a cat always helps;-)
| Title: Chapter 14- In Control
| 02 Nov 2008 2:25 am
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| Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed)
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Lovely chapter! It's so good to see Harry and Severus bonding and growing closer. I'm glad Severus is working with Harry to help him recognize how wrong it was for the Dursleys to mistreat him, and that it wasn't his fault. Harry really needs to know it, and he needs someone to help and guide him, but even more, to love him, and I hope it's going to be Severus. Even though Severus seems concerned that Voldemort might find out some way, but I think those two really need each other.
I'm looking forward to more!
Author's Response: thank you ! Harry and Severus will have some more obstacles to overcome in a very near future, but yes, they're on the right way ! they both need each other, though they will have to learn how exactly to deal with that!
great chapter, really enjoyed reading it
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it !
Happy Birthday, Shadow! As always, I enjoyed this chapter very much, particularly when Sev got all super-protective when they arrived at Grimmauld Place. I look forward to the next chapter very much.
As thanks I'm sending you virtual sweets and Shadow virtual catnip. Enjoy!
Author's Response: Thanks a lot, Shadow says he's happy with the catnip and Snape says he's got a bad breath now- well honestly he already had before ;-)
EXCELLENT keep it up
Author's Response: 38 chapters in French so far, don't worry ;-)
| Title: Chapter 14- In Control
| 01 Nov 2008 4:11 pm
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| Reviewer: Nicol Leoraine (Anonymous)
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It's an awesome story. I love your portraial of Snape and even more like Shadow. Please hurry and give us the next chapter:-)
Author's Response: thank you, next chapter is on its way ;-)
| Title: Chapter 13- Black Cats Bring Bad Luck
| 22 Oct 2008 12:33 am
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| Reviewer: Onaleia (Anonymous)
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I thought Harry Potter's hair was black.
Author's Response: yes, a little problem of translation actually. Brown/black hair both translate with "brun" in French.
| Title: Chapter 13- Black Cats Bring Bad Luck
| 21 Oct 2008 1:22 am
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| Reviewer: Ripuku (Signed)
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I know some french...What are you looking to translate?
Author's Response: This story actually ;-)
Hello! I just found your story and it's fantastical! I love it so very much and it's just so cute! I hope that you update very soon. If you would like another Beta someone to go over the chapter and correct the english (there were a few mistakes still in spelling for example) I would be more than honored to do so. Let me know. Don't get me wrong though your story is just awesome and many other positive adjectives. ;)
Love and a Peace,
Kates
Author's Response: Thank you very much ! I might just take on your offer, my, translation is quite a hard process at time and I think that my beta was more focused on the meaning, that might relieve her if she knew someone was checking for spelling ;-)
| Title: Chapter 13- Black Cats Bring Bad Luck
| 16 Oct 2008 11:11 pm
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| Reviewer: HeliosTor (Anonymous)
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Thankyou very much for posting this, it's brilliant. A lovely idea, thanks for the translation!
Author's Response: Thank you, my translators are a wonderful team indeed ;-)
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