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Title: Chapter 13- Black Cats Bring Bad Luck 15 Oct 2008 11:31 pm
Reviewer: Kirsty (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Awww...I love it
    "I would not want a cat of any other colour,"
    sooo sweet :D how i wish I'd kept up French so that I could read ahead. Keep it up

    Author's Response: I'm about to post chapter 37 in French, there's still a long way ahead ;-)
Title: Chapter 13- Black Cats Bring Bad Luck 15 Oct 2008 10:16 pm
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) [Report This]
    Brilliant chapter (as always) I'm really glad you updated this story :)

    It really sucks that those horrible Dursleys are tying to get a hold of Harry. Hasn't he suffered enough? I pray that Dumbledore will find a solution.

    Poor Harry, talk about a horrible nightmare! I'm glad Sev could help him, Harry really doesn't deserve to have to deal with all that guilt. I thought the ending of the chapter was really sweet, I liked Sev's comment: "I would not want a cat of any other colour," It made me smile :)

    I'll keep looking for more chapters!

    Author's Response:

    Thank you ! I thought it was a bit of a bad chapter, but then as I am more advanced in French ( obviously ) the old chapters seems odd now ! I'm glad people seem to like it ;-)

    nightmares are going to be a crucial point in the future for Harry, and as for suffering... well let's just say that there will be more obstacles in the way before they can finally get some rest ;-)

Title: Chapter 13- Black Cats Bring Bad Luck 15 Oct 2008 9:24 pm
Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) [Report This]
    great chapter and i'm glad harry/shadow is safe with his protector severus at snape manor

    i'm useless at french

    Author's Response: thank you ! as for safe... when has Harry ever be safe ? ;-)
Title: Chapter 13- Black Cats Bring Bad Luck 15 Oct 2008 7:25 am
Reviewer: Morgansnape87 (Signed) [Report This]
    Whoot Good chapter keep it up

    Author's Response: thank you, the next one shouldn't be long ;-)
Title: Chapter 13- Black Cats Bring Bad Luck 15 Oct 2008 6:53 am
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Lovely chapter! I'm glad to see that Severus and Harry are settling in well together, and I loved the ending, with Severus coming to comfort Harry after that horrible nightmare.

    And the Dursleys are just too awful!

    I'm really looking forward to the next chapter!

    Author's Response: thank you ! Ah, but who can resist a young cat with big eyes, anyway ? Hopeless ! ;-)
Title: Chapter 13- Black Cats Bring Bad Luck 15 Oct 2008 5:24 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Very nice, and very long chapter! I'm impressed.

    I just love the way you write, with humour and yet you don't distract from the seriousness of their situation.

    I guess Snape has been Harrified. It's hard not to grow to love the kid; or the cat as the case may be!

    Author's Response: it will only go longer as the story goes, I'm afraid ( for my translators ;-) ) ! Actually there is a lot of room for humor with Harry and Snape, and especially with a cat in the middle !  And yes, Potter might be Potter, but he also is Shadow, and in some ways Snape is a bit cat-like after all, quite possessive and exclusive with his objects of affection ! Oh, and who can resist a cat, anyway ? ;-)
Title: Chapter 12- Of cats and men 17 Sep 2008 5:24 am
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) [Report This]
    Glad Sev is better, it sure was funny when the Order freaked out when he returned to Grimmauld Place, lol. I'm also glad that Harry got to see his friends, they definitely will have a lot to talk about once school starts up again.

    Seems Dumbledore has cracked the mystery of the bracelet! And it looks like Sev’s got a new determination to watch over Harry/Shadow.

    Hope to read the next chapter soon! And congrats on making the long length in French! Looks like there will be lots more chapters to read once it's translated (yea!) :D

    Author's Response:

    Thank you ! There will be a lot more discoveries around this, but yes, it's done for the bracelet ;-) 

    Unfortunately, a lot will still happen before Harry and his friends can see each other again...

    But I think that at least the half of next chapter is translated so it shouldn't be long until next update ;-)

Title: Chapter 12- Of cats and men 09 Sep 2008 10:12 pm
Reviewer: sunsethill (Signed) [Report This]
    Ah, I enjoyed the synopsis of what was going on with the magic the night Harry escaped. I think we have Severus convinced now. Very enjoyable chapter.

    Author's Response: thank you ! to build a real strong relationship will take time, but yes, the foudations are there ;-)
Title: Chapter 12- Of cats and men 08 Sep 2008 4:44 pm
Reviewer: tabbycat (Signed) [Report This]
    Hi, I've just read your last two chapters - excellent exploration of Severus and Dumbledore! I like how you kept Moody from agreeing for the rescue plan. And Ron was great - though I can't help but wonder how they will react to Snape being 'nice'. For some reason you have {del sp} in the previous chapter and {sp} in this one?

    Author's Response: Thank you ! Hum, there will actually be a few more twist before they'll be able to really react to that... and rough twist, trust me ! I'm really sorry for the strange notes, they are from my beta, I missed them in my final version :-s
Title: Chapter 12- Of cats and men 08 Sep 2008 7:36 am
Reviewer: Anaknisatanas (Signed) [Report This]
    Very nice. I love the explanation of how Harry gained his Animagus ability. The interactions between Snape and Harry in cat form were so endearing. I can't wait to see more.

    Author's Response: thanks ! Even Snape can't resist a stupid kitten with strange maneers ;-)

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