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Title: Chapter 5- Of Cats and Potions 28 Feb 2008 5:28 pm
Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed) [Report This]
    They were close ti finding Harry, so close. But not close enough. Sigh, oh well maybe in the next chapter!

    Author's Response: yes, Severus and the cat needed a little more time together, I think ;-)
Title: Chapter 4 - Missing 28 Feb 2008 5:22 pm
Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed) [Report This]
    He was going to offer the order his (Potter Cat) that sounds just like something Severus would do! I am enjoying this story a lot!
    Scorpia

    Author's Response: I'm glad you do, I like In Character Severus, I must admit ;-)
Title: Chapter 3- The Cat-Who-Lived 28 Feb 2008 5:17 pm
Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed) [Report This]
    The Cat-Who-Lived! Lol, Severus is just tot funny! How come the letter Severus received from Albus wasn't in italics like Harry's letters were?
    Great chappie!
    Scorpia

    Author's Response: oh good question, probably a formating problem, there is always something that won't work between livejournal, ff.net and here, that makes me crazy ! The story was supposed to be called The Cat who Lived, I loved the idea, but the title was already used ;-)
Title: Chapter 2- Before Leaving 28 Feb 2008 5:09 pm
Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed) [Report This]
    Cat amimagus Harry? Cool! So Harry escaped right before the DE showed up. Will Alubus & The Order think that Harry is dead? Where will Harry go? Great chapter!
    Scorpia

    Author's Response: yep, animagus Harry, I know this is quite common, but I hope the story is not too classical though !
Title: Chapter 1- Lily's Lullaby 28 Feb 2008 5:03 pm
Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed) [Report This]
    Oooh! That first chapter was kinda spooky! Lol, Great job!

    Author's Response: thank you, I am really bad with first chapters, but I hope this improves later ! I never know how to start a story properly !*sigh*
Title: Chapter 6 - By the fire 28 Feb 2008 3:06 pm
Reviewer: NotEvenHere (Anonymous) [Report This]
    YAY! That was awesome. "Shadow. Harry Potter." I love it. That was a fun chapter and I great lead up to Snape finding out it was Harry. Poor Snape. Oddly, I'd like to give him a hug. What an unpleasant surprise. LOL

    Author's Response:

    lol thank you, he's going to need it, the poor man is not so fond of surprises, you know ;-p

     

Title: Chapter 6 - By the fire 28 Feb 2008 12:19 pm
Reviewer: KimSpiritTalks (Signed) [Report This]
    Here I was, wondering if the cat would ever show who it really was. Then, about halfway through the chapter I knew, I just knew what you were going to do to us. And you did it! The big fat cliff hanger! UGH Well, it was a wonderful chapter and now the next is going to be even better and I can't wait!

    Author's Response:

    hehe, oh don't worry, I'm not so big on cliffies... oh wait... *looks at the next chapters*... yes maybe a little! ;-p

    In the next one, Snape's reaction and... Order meeting !

Title: Chapter 5- Of Cats and Potions 12 Feb 2008 7:02 am
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) [Report This]
    I appologise for not reveiwing sooner!

    I really do enjoy reading this story, it's interesting, origanal, entertaining and humorous. I think your doing a wonderful job. PLEASE posta gang soon!

    As for translating, sorry, I don't have a translator and know hardly any French at all. Hmm, there are online translators, but they don't always translate everything unfortunatly...

    Author's Response: thank you very much, I love reviews ;-) A wonderful translator proposed to do the job, I hope she won't get bored too soon, she is doing a wonerful job !
Title: Chapter 1- Lily's Lullaby 11 Feb 2008 3:05 am
Reviewer: honore (Anonymous) [Report This]
    French or English,I like your idea. I like the direction you've taken the story so far. Looking forward to more, Thanks

    Author's Response: thank you, I hope you will like the next chapters ;-)
Title: Chapter 5- Of Cats and Potions 10 Feb 2008 3:42 am
Reviewer: Judgment99 (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh I love this story. I would love to help but.....I dont speak French....

    Author's Response: Thank you ! Don't worry, I'll manage, Skrewt helped me a lot with the translation and the next one shouldn't be long now ;-)

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