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Title: Chapter 18: Unannounced 16 May 2008 11:48 pm
Reviewer: Cecilia Farrell (Signed) [Report This]
    I love the little slip of the tongue, 'i prefer a household of two thank you very much' lol, hmm... intriguing, i smell potential, LOL. I can't wait to get back to the other dimension Harry(1) and see what's transpiring. Its nice to see Harry(2) here talk about his father and get a glimpse of what living with a amnesiac mother and well quite frankly controlling - in a good way!!!- father does to a person, he seems just as messed up (not as much as Harry 1 is)in his own little way. Please update soon, you've left on a tantalisingly high note.
    Wonderful as usual.
    :)
    Cecilia

    Author's Response:

    And Harry's sharp ears picking up on that one word, ha ha. 

    Yes, I think this Harry has had a better family life than his counterpart…but certainly not  a perfect life.  The love between father and son has dampened the conflict between these two different personalities, but it's still there.  And the stresses of Voldemort and his mother…Harry is probably due for a teenage rebellion in a few years.  ;)

    Thank you for reviewing!

Title: Chapter 18: Unannounced 16 May 2008 1:17 am
Reviewer: Theowyn (Signed) [Report This]
    What a beautiful conversation between Harry and Ron. :)

    Author's Response: Thank you!  It was a struggle for me to find the right words. 
Title: Chapter 18: Unannounced 16 May 2008 12:51 am
Reviewer: JolisGSD (Signed) [Report This]
    Wonderful chapter!! I was almost rolling on the floor reading of Molly's invasion and poor Severus' attempts to withstand her. Sev wearing an old green shirt was hilarious as was Harry's attempt to comfort him with the "put up a good fight" comment.

    The Ron/Harry bonding moments were great and I loved Harry's wisdom about Severus' bludgers.

    Great writing. The more I read of your story, the more I am impressed and I'm not usually much for alternate universe themes. But this is wonderful!

    Author's Response: I don't think Harry could have said anything in that moment that would have comforted Severus.  It takes a while for the ego to recover after a battle with Molly Weasley.  :D

    I know what you mean about not being much for certain stories.  Sometimes I'll take a chance on a story I wouldn't normally read, and be pleasantly surprised.  It's good to try new things.  :)  
Title: Chapter 18: Unannounced 15 May 2008 10:56 pm
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Whoo!! Fantastic chapter! I love Molly. I was so amused with her in this chapter! LOL! Delightful. And lol, when Harry told Snape he had put up a good fight! LOL! Fantastic chapter! I loved it.

    The only thing is what Harry and Ron stop after their game and sprawl outside on the grass. Yet, you left something about a couch in: "Ask...?" said Ron. Then he groaned, sinking back into the couch cushions. "Snape. He'll never let you go."

    Author's Response:

    Whoops! As you may have guessed, that scene originally took place in a different setting. :) I've fixed that.

    It's funny to think about Severus surrendering his clothes to Molly. :D Thanks for the review!

Title: Chapter 18: Unannounced 15 May 2008 10:10 pm
Reviewer: SiriuslyMental (Signed) [Report This]
    This chapter was absolute magic. I am enjoying your story so much. Beautifully written. "I like beans on toast" - wonderful. You've got a completely human, canon character of Snape and that's terribly difficult to accomplish. Well done.

    Author's Response: Beans on toast seems like definite bachelor chow.  :)  Thanks for the kudos!  I think Snape is second only to the Malfoys in the list of characters who are difficult to keep in canon and keep human.  I mostly draw on my own repressed, bitter nature.  ;)

Title: Chapter 18: Unannounced 15 May 2008 7:46 pm
Reviewer: graynavarre (Signed) [Report This]
    love it - no one stands a chance against Hurricane Molly ("you put up a good fight" - smirk.

    I am glad someone was able to make the twins listen - put the fear of Snape in them.

    I really don't want either Harry to go back. I want two happy Harrys and two happy Severus's.

    Author's Response:

    Ha, I certainly wouldn't want to meet Molly Weasley in dark alley...especially if I looked like I hadn't eaten recently.  ;)

    I'd love to see the twins in Potions class...I'm sure it would be interesting.  :)

    Thank you for reviewing!

Title: Chapter 18: Unannounced 15 May 2008 5:07 pm
Reviewer: sunsethill (Signed) [Report This]
    I was chuckling like a fiend when Molly descended. My kids thought I was crazy. And then you turned it around as a chance for this Ron and that Harry to get to know each other. And Harry's bludger insight was brilliant (which of course means that you are brilliant). Snape's insults really are like bludgers and you just need to learn to duck them and keep going.

    Author's Response:

    It was a fun chapter to write. :) Tell your kids they had better behave or you'll start acting like Molly.  Or maybe you already do!  :D

Title: Chapter 18: Unannounced 15 May 2008 3:29 pm
Reviewer: NotEvenHere (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great chapter! I love your Harry here so much. So confused and sweet. And Snape was great here as well. I had to chuckle when he called Molly, 'blasted woman'. LOL I am glad Ron is being so accepting of Harry here. And the twins and Molly. And I love that Snape is checking up on Harry to make sure he's all right. Prickly but sweet. YAY! Thanks!

    Author's Response:

    Thanks!  I've grown rather fond of this Harry as I've gone through the story.  I think he figures that if his other self is best mates with Ron, then Ron can't be so bad.  :)  And Snape thought he was being secretive with his checking up on Harry, but Harry was on to him.  Hee hee.  :D

Title: Chapter 18: Unannounced 15 May 2008 3:11 pm
Reviewer: Twinheart (Signed) [Report This]
    I enjoyed Ran and Harry's conversation alot! Had a bit of trouble buying Snape (any Snape from any dimension) letting Molly Weasley invade his house and take over. . .Merlin - but she's pushy obnoxious broad, isn't she?

    Author's Response:

    With that many kids, she has to be a drill sergeant.  Snape didn't stand a chance.  ;)

Title: Chapter 18: Unannounced 15 May 2008 9:04 am
Reviewer: Attackfish (Signed) [Report This]
    I think I love Molly Weasley. She needs to keep all of her chicks in good order and doesn't mind co opting chicks that weren't hers to start with even if they aren't chicks anymore. And the twins should know who they're messing with.

    Author's Response:

    Were you talking to Hedwig when you wrote this? ;) It was fun to think of Molly adopting Severus. She would totally do it. :D

    The twins would be a world of trouble if Snape and Molly ever teamed up to bring them in line.


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