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Reviews For Never Say Remember
Title: Chapter 4: He Knows 16 Jan 2008 7:23 pm
Reviewer: Hanka (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Nice, I like the way you bring your characters to live, slowly adding informations and feelings until they seem lively and real. By the way I find your ,,this-plane-Snape's'' very funny:

    "You're leaving me alone with him?"

    -that was just brilliant!

    Author's Response:

    This Harry does seem to make Snape feel very uncomfortable.  :) 

Title: Chapter 3: Lost at Sea 16 Jan 2008 7:10 pm
Reviewer: Hanka (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Ah the angst - yummy :-)

    I wish more stories were written like your's.
    You have the talent of making the dialogues sound meaningful and expressive without bein cliché, very good job indeed!

    Author's Response:

    Who doesn't like angst?

     

    Thank you for giving me your reactions on every chapter.  It's delightful.  :)

Title: Chapter 2: The Long Night 16 Jan 2008 6:57 pm
Reviewer: Hanka (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Better and better:-) Did I mention I really love your story? Because I do! I like the way Snape and Harry seem so different and yet strangely alike in these two dimensions. Can't wait for more!
    Thanks for taking your time to write:-)

    Author's Response: Thanks!  I tried to keep them in character despite their different experiences.
Title: Chapter 1: A Parallel 16 Jan 2008 6:48 pm
Reviewer: Hanka (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This is the best story beginning I've read in a long long time. You managed to introduce the characters in a very clear and evocative way and the appearance of Lilly was brilliantly pulled off. I've read so many stories, that I often find myself just scroling through the text without really reading.

    Your story captivated me from the very beginnig - I can't wait to click at the next button. And seven more chapters to read? Yay :-)

    Author's Response:

    A new reader!  Wonderful!

     

    It's good to know that I captured your attention.  I know some of my chapters are short, but I felt that if I added more words, they would end up being repetitive, or filler.  They would weaken the impact of the words already there, and cause people to do that scrolling thing. ;)  

    I'm happy you took a moment to review before you clicked that next button, tempting as it was. :)
Title: Chapter 8: A Potent Brew 16 Jan 2008 6:07 pm
Reviewer: Jade_Sullivan (Signed) [Report This]
    Brilliant! This chapter was excellent! Snape already seems a bit milder than usual. And I love Harry's cheekiness. You used great detail when describing Harry's appearance, such as how he entered the room scratching his palms, his untidy hair. I love your Harry--well, I love both of your Harrys, actually, but this one is particularly endearing. Keep up the amazing work! This story is definitely one of my favorites :)

    Author's Response: I’m surprised and delighted by the reception this Harry has gotten.  I guess he's a bit of a charmer!   Thank you for sharing your thoughts!
Title: Chapter 8: A Potent Brew 16 Jan 2008 8:28 am
Reviewer: Lio Saoirse (Anonymous) [Report This]
    good chappie!!!

    Author's Response: Thanks!
Title: Chapter 8: A Potent Brew 16 Jan 2008 5:28 am
Reviewer: celestialuna (Signed) [Report This]
    good chapter.

    Author's Response: Thanks!
Title: Chapter 8: A Potent Brew 16 Jan 2008 3:22 am
Reviewer: ER (Anonymous) [Report This]
    "European or African swallow-wort?"

    LOL!!!!!! Perfect! We have a huge joke going on in my math class about Monty Python. Good chapter. I really enjoyed that line.

    Author's Response: Well, it is a simple question of weight ratios.  A five ounce bird could not carry a one pound coconut…  :) Cookie for you!
Title: Chapter 8: A Potent Brew 16 Jan 2008 3:06 am
Reviewer: sunsethill (Signed) [Report This]
    Lovely class with this Harry showing he's the son of a potion's master. First time ever for points--snicker. And the tension with Ron and skewering Draco was a nice way to show how different this Harry is. Now I'm worrying about our poor potions-awful Harry in the other reality.

    Author's Response:

    Potions class is always fun.  :)  And we'll check in with our Harry in the next chapter.

     Thanks for reviewing!
Title: Chapter 8: A Potent Brew 16 Jan 2008 2:24 am
Reviewer: Polaris (Signed) [Report This]
    Haha one I am definite is Monty Python and the Holy Grail. Love the swallow part.

    That was great, I like this Harry's spunk. It's probably just that he's not really even a little bit scared of Severus which is fun. Can't wait for more!

    Author's Response:

    Cookie!  :)

     Yep, Harry's treating our Snape like "his" Snape, and expecting the same reactions he gets at home.  He just perceives Snape differently, and acts accordingly.  Much to Snape's chagrin.  :)

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