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Title: Chapter 6: Catching Up 05 Jan 2008 3:55 am
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) [Report This]
    Haha, can't wait to see Ron's reaction to THAT! *imagins Ron falling out of chair then jumping up and demanding WHAT?! in disbelief* hehe. You know, I'm likeing this story more then I thought I would, I'm not up for two demention stories, but the way you have this is quite good. My favorite prosepective is our Snape with the other Harry. So cute! The other Harry makes me think of a little hyper kid, makes me smile. Please post again soon!

    Author's Response:

    I’m glad you were willing to check out the story!  I've often been pleasantly surprised by stories I didn't think I would like.

     

    Many thanks!

Title: Chapter 6: Catching Up 05 Jan 2008 1:56 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    I liked Ron's comments about Harry going mental. Poor Ron will be in denial now that he found out who Harry's step dad happens to be. Great chapter and I hope there will be more soon!

    Author's Response:

    Ron doesn't seem ready to have his best mate defend his least favorite professor.  :)

     

    Thank you for your thoughts!

Title: Chapter 6: Catching Up 05 Jan 2008 1:19 am
Reviewer: sunsethill (Signed) [Report This]
    I really like how this chapter subtly showed what Harry would have been like with a good home life. The hints about Draco are intriguing and I look forward to finding out more. And it's interestingn that the other world's Ron doesn't like Harry much. That will be a shock for our Harry. And our Snape is in for a surprise when he sees that Harry could be a good potions student if he had had the right incentive.

    Author's Response:

    Yes, this is a Harry who asks for help and seeks a connection…he isn't trying to do everything on his own.

     

    I’m glad you liked the chapter.  It doesn't have the intensity of some of the previous ones, but they can't all be 100% pure adrenaline (cheesy line from a cheesy action movie).

     

    Merci beaucoup! 

Title: Chapter 5: The World, Altered 04 Jan 2008 6:01 am
Reviewer: Kirinin (Signed) [Report This]
    Oi. So far this is amazing. I hope you continue ASAP!

    -K

    Author's Response:

    Thanks!  Yes, I'll update regularly. 

Title: Chapter 5: The World, Altered 03 Jan 2008 10:07 pm
Reviewer: sunsethill (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, poor Severus. I can think this might be even worse in some ways than knowing you caused someone's death. I'll be interested to see how the new Harry deals with the mind-magic stuff compared to the old Harry.

    Author's Response:

    Yes, AU Snape has to deal with the consequences of his choices on a much more constant basis than canon Snape. 

     

    Thank you for your thoughts!

Title: Chapter 5: The World, Altered 03 Jan 2008 9:54 pm
Reviewer: ariel (Anonymous) [Report This]
    That is so unfair, who is suppose to be the adult! It was Snape fault, I would be worried if he is with her for pity and guilt, and the way he reacted for me it would be a sign that he is afraid to hear the truth. Ignorance is not an excuse.

    Author's Response:

    You'll get lots more of Snape and Harry's thoughts on the situation.  The joy of Harry and Snape is that they see the world so differently, and clash horns, yet they often both have a valid point to make. 

     

    Thank you for the feedback!

Title: Chapter 5: The World, Altered 03 Jan 2008 7:34 pm
Reviewer: Jade_Sullivan (Signed) [Report This]
    I was so excited when I saw that you had updated! You describe emotions brilliantly--like the vague look on Lily's face when Harry clings to her, or even the desperate look in Harry's eyes as speaks to his mother.

    I think you've captured Snape wonderfully as well. The end reminded me so much of the Snape in the other demention. It's interesting to see how the two connect. I feel incredibly sympathetic toward Harry. I feel sorry for both of them, really. Both Harry and Snape love Lily, and it made my heart about drop out of my chest when I read this line:

    "You know nothing," Snape said. "You vile hobgoblin, stealing my son and latching onto her as though you were hers. Who are you to intrude into my life and demand answers? You are the one who has no idea what it means to love her."

    **About killed me.

    I can't wait to see what happens next in this story! I love it.

    Author's Response:

    Your excitement is infectious—I'm excited when I see you've reviewed again!

     

    Yes, I tried to keep Snape's basic personality the same, yet still have AU-Snape changed by all the choices he's made—the bad and the good. 

     

    Is it crass to say I love that line, too?  I've read it at least 20 times during the editing process and it still gives me chills.  Eeep!  Can you imagine Snape getting in your face and saying that to you?  Run, Harry, run!

Title: Chapter 5: The World, Altered 03 Jan 2008 5:57 pm
Reviewer: SiriuslyMental (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, this chapter was brilliant! I don't even know what to say, except why don't you have more stories, amazing as you are? Harry is wonderfully in character (canon), and Snape is just...ah, I love this! Please update soon!

    Author's Response:

    Such kind words are motivating me to write more, so perhaps there are additional fics in my future. 

     

    Many thanks!

Title: Chapter 5: The World, Altered 03 Jan 2008 2:18 pm
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow. Fantastic chapter wand thank you so much for the quick update! That was awesome. it's amazing to visit these different worlds and see the same charactrs, only different and how they react to each other. Tragic Lily. Really good job!

    Author's Response:

    Thank you!  It's so great to hear your thoughts on each chapter!  Yes, I'm trying to follow the theme of different choices, different consequences.

Title: Chapter 4: He Knows 03 Jan 2008 1:42 am
Reviewer: Alexis (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Another good chapter! A little thing I noticed- Snape mentioned that Harry should have used the 'Accio' spell but technically he won't learn that spell until his fourth year. It doesn't really matter but I thought I'd point it out anyways. Great chapter and I am eagerly awaiting more!

    Author's Response:

    Darn!  I tried to make sure any magic beyond Harry's education would be explained to him, but I missed that one.  Perhaps I'll fix it in an edit.  Until then…well, it's not out of character for Snape to demand a spell Harry couldn't have learned yet.        

     

    Thanks for the info and the accolades!


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