| Title: Something So Undefined
| 04 Sep 2011 11:47 pm
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| Reviewer: Aprella (Signed)
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I read it this far now, I'm going to continue tomorrow. So Far, I love it! It's very original, never saw anything like it. It's really great so far and those beast you made up (you did make it up, right?) awesome! And Snape is so funny! I love that this is from his point of view! I think that that makes to story a lot more interesting! Thanks for writing such a cool story! (and I wish I was stuck in rain forest with both of them!)
I started to read this on FFN, and for some reason I quit before I was completely caught up on it, and now I have no idea why. It's really, really good. Severus' and Alastor's constant bickering is funny. I love his relationship with Harry too and I find it amusing that he's becoming rather indulgent. The song lyrics you've used for the chapter titles are great too. Falcon In the Dive seems especially appropriate and I think it fits Severus' character really well (although, I might be a little biased about that since it comes from my favorite musical). Well done.
I absolutely love this story.
I read it before, back when it was only about 20 chapters or so, but there was a long gap in updates (while you were rewriting parts, I assume?), so I lost track of it after a while until today.
I hope it doesn't fizzle to a complete stop again; I'm really enjoying it, and I can't wait to see how everything ends up.
| Title: But On My Soul
| 02 Mar 2011 10:15 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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I adore Severus' comments on life in general and Alastor in particular wonderful writing
I lovet this story because it's so orignal. Most of the time, when other stories have been a long time between updates, I need to re-read just to recall what's going on. With this story, as soon as I start reading, everything about it just leaps to mind because this Snape (and his connnection to Moody, attitude toward Albus, etc., etc.) is so distinctive. I admit, though, that I often re-read the previous chapter just for fun.
Good to see an update here :) cant wait to see just why the dementors were at Hogwarts!
| Title: I Wasn't Born to Sack and Slaughter
| 17 Jan 2011 11:21 am
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| Reviewer: hazpotsfan (Signed)
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Aaaaaahhhhhhhh :D :D lovedddd ittt! please please please update soon! i'm sad i finished so soon because now i have to be patient enough to wait for updates! ;) you are amazing! xx
Just wondering, how many chapters do you think this story will have? love itt :)
| Title: God Knows I've Never Been a Spiritual Man
| 15 Jan 2011 8:30 pm
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| Reviewer: hazpotsfan (Signed)
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I am really really enjoying this so far! :) :) can't stop reading haha! xx
I've spent quite a few hours over the past week or so reading the first fifty chapters of this story, and I really really like it. At first, I was taken aback by the point of view, but I have to admit that it's grown on me. Also, I accidentally referred to myself as a "dunderhead" earlier--not out loud, but it was still an interesting development =]. I'll be eagerly awaiting the next chapter!
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