An excellent chapter though I was a bit confused about where the Floo station was. After reading the last chapter I thought it was in London and then it turned out to be in Perth. Regardless I was on the edge of my seat when I realised that Voldemort and his Deatheaters were there and I almost fell out of my chair with relief when Severus managed to use the Portkey. The "discussion" was execllently written and I could feel Snape's aggravation and frustration. Are we going to find out what is on the parchment that Narcissa gave to Severus? Great job!
merlin forbid that severus say he *cares* about harry and doesn't want him to get killed .... ;')
i've missed this story! it seems ages since i read it first and this chapter just reminded me how fab it is, i had to go back a chapter to remind myself what was going on and the part last chapter with sev and moody made me chuckle again, i love those 2 and hope there will be more of them soon!
| Title: In the Middle of the Night
| 15 Jul 2008 6:52 am
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| Reviewer: Missy Eye (Anonymous)
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i agree with what you had done, (via ur authors note)
Huzzah for the update XD Thanks for taking some time out of RL to get this out. I'd forgotten how awesome your version of Snape was. Thankyou for the reminder :D
The scene at the floo station was interesting. I imagined it sort of like a large train station, but with floos instead. They still had ticket barriers though for some reason. Weird.
I really like the way you write Snape. Sort of Canon still, how he might have behaved if he had liked Harry. Very independent.
I take it the letter is from Draco?
| Title: I Go Walking in My Sleep
| 15 Jul 2008 12:04 am
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| Reviewer: mwc (Signed)
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"He was a bloody idiot. In fact, he was quite possibly the heir to the throne of the kingdom of bloody idiots. Well, no, that position was reserved for one particular fifth year who insisted upon haring off to government offices in the middle of the night, but at this point he was quite certain that he was at least a member of the governing body of said kingdom. At the very least."
i think this may be my favorite quote from this fic. i think your snape is my all time favorite. and i think that maybe you can read my mind because severus' inner dialogue is a lot like my own. =) here's to hoping RL calms down a little bit so you can write some more of this awesome fic. keep up the good work!
| Title: I Go Walking in My Sleep
| 14 Jul 2008 11:06 pm
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| Reviewer: Missy Eye (Anonymous)
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I really like this story, it has quite a new twist to it!
| Title: In the Middle of the Night
| 20 Jun 2008 9:40 am
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| Reviewer: dorothy (Anonymous)
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aiie, you've had me up all night reading! (which is of course to say: fantastic!) i'm trapped in your story, please keep up the great work!
It's hard to even to begin writing a review for this. When I first read it, I thought it was going to be a pretty ordinary story,but with every new chapter you've surprised me. New plot twists, excellent writing, a good story.
GREAT JOB.
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