Severus downed his without question although he didn’t care for the look in her eyes when she handed it to him—unless he missed his guess, there was going to be a suggestion of mindhealers in the near future. Probably the very near future. Alastor glared for a bit, considering the two vials he was handed from all angles before he finally took them. Perhaps St. Mungos offers a two-for-one special.
Ohh i love your wit, this is the best line ever, lol. You capture his Character so well, its a joy to read.
| Title: In the Middle of the Night
| 19 Apr 2008 1:28 am
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| Reviewer: tabbycat (Signed)
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Good chapter. Complicated thoughts for a complicated man.
Hurray you updated! Seeing this chapter really brightened my day. This chapter was extreamly amusing, I absolutly love the way you write Severus. I find I'm greatly amused with Snape and Moody's banters, they are always full of wit and sarcasm. Ron had better lock himself in a Gringotts vault! Severus is non too pleased with that 'bat' comment. This story is truly one of my absolute favorites, I look forward to your next chapter, keep up the great work.
| Title: In the Middle of the Night
| 10 Apr 2008 7:01 am
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| Reviewer: JolisGSD (Signed)
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I really enjoy reading your story -- I chuckle at Severus' internal dialogue throughout!
Thanks so much for writing.
| Title: What I've Been Looking For
| 07 Apr 2008 6:19 pm
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| Reviewer: Rhea (Signed)
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It was great! I absolutly like the relationship between Harry and Severus in yor story.
| Title: I Go Walking in My Sleep
| 28 Mar 2008 9:05 pm
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| Reviewer: anna (Anonymous)
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I am really enjoying this story it is very well written
Wow! What a chapter! I enjoyed your treatment of the Dept. of Mysteries much more than Rowling's.
| Title: What I've Been Looking For
| 26 Mar 2008 9:33 pm
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| Reviewer: NotEvenHere (Anonymous)
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"This is why children should be kept in cages until they're twenty-five." ROFL That was great. I love your Snape. He's awesome. I am really, really hoping for Severus to finish his tongue-lashing. Hee hee. I love how snarky he is. I am curioius about why Dumbledore wants to talk to Harry as well. Can't wait for the next chapter. Great work this one! Thanks.
When I noticed you updated this story, I clicked on it faster then you could blink! This chapter was really great, just as excieting as the last. The battle that you edited around from Rowling's version was extreamly well put together and the details brilliant. What Harry described to seeing and the reason why he went after Bellatrix was both saddening and nauseating, I agree with Harry's sentiments. You write Severus amazingly well, I always enjoy reading your story because you capture the character just right. I was especially amused when reading his comments and thoughts about Fudge. This story is absolutly a true joy to read; the contnet is always brilliant and beautiful work, the characters sound just as they should, they way you edit cannon events with your own ideas is geat, and you have the perfect combination of seriousness and humor. You have a great story here and I can not wait for the next chapter! PLEASE, post again as soon as you possibly can. You made my day by posting this update.
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