I love your Severus. I'm sure I've told you that before but every chapter I read make the feeling grow.
Excellent chapter and I can't wait for an update!
| Title: So I Can Finally Find
| 08 Mar 2008 1:29 am
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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GREAT JOB!!!!!! PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE AGAIN SOON!!!!!!
You are wonderful to have updated! This chapter was really fun to read, full of excietment and surprises. You did an amazing job combining your own ideas with cannon events, it made a really interesting and amazing chapter. I'm glad you included the Weasley twins in this, they are awesome. Shame what happened to Fletcher, gory, but since I was never fond of the character I'm not real upset. I wonder where Harry is, can't wait to find out. Your chapters are always full of great content and are of a wonderful length. PLEASE, please, please post again soon! I am truly attached to this story, and am very anxious to find out what happens next. Brilliant work as always!
| Title: So I Can Finally Find
| 07 Mar 2008 10:58 pm
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| Reviewer: NotEvenHere (Anonymous)
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Oh no! That was a fun chapter though. I loved all the action. You write it very well.
I have to admit (I know, I'm lame) that I didn't notice the chapter titles are the lines of the song and I thought that was awesome. But in my defense, I only starting reading this last update and read it all without looking at the main page mostly. Anyways, love the chapter titles and the title as well. Great story and can't wait for an update. Your Sev is perfect! :o)
EEK! Cliffie! Can't wait for the next chapter, this one was great! (Love the twins, btw.)
Thanks so much!
-Elise
| Title: Through the Jungle of Doubt
| 07 Mar 2008 5:27 pm
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| Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed)
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Harry & Severus stuck in a forest, they will kill each other!! LOl, If the beasteys don't get them first!
| Title: I Go Walking in My Sleep
| 07 Mar 2008 5:09 pm
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| Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed)
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Uh oh, something's lurking in the forest! I love monsters at Hogwarts, LOL, :) Great chapter I really like Harry sticking up for the Slytherins!
| Title: In the Middle of the Night
| 07 Mar 2008 4:55 pm
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| Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed)
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Great first chapter! I love Billy Joel, :) I also loved that Snape got to see that not all his Slytherins appreciate his taunting. I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter, this story looks really interesting!
Great job, :)
Scorpia
Excellent retelling of the battle.
Ron's rambling were so funny ("vampire" " bat", etc). Again, the hilight of the story was Severus's thought. I almost choked on my diet coke with this one : “The flaming X’s are the ones Potter and the rest of the dunderheads have apparently ruled out; we’re going through the rest one by one until they’re found.” And executed.
As for Moody and Severus, really, two grown men should know better than to beat each other with spells during a war when they might be needed at any time.
This is one of the few stories in which I like Moody.
Thank you so much for this story.
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