| Title: I Wasn't Born to Walk On Water
| 07 Jan 2010 7:06 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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I giggle all through your chapters I love Severus' thoughts thank you for updating
Argh! And now I must wait with your earlier readers. *sigh* On the other hand, I might get to bed before 2, tonight.
I am eagerly awaiting the next chapter! :-)
Nicely done!
(You, not Severus, though he wasn't bad.)
I'm really happy to see another writer do something with that dead basilisk, BTW!
It worries me that he hasn't read the note from Narcissa yet.
| Title: I Wasn't Born to Walk On Water
| 03 Jan 2010 1:06 pm
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| Reviewer: LuKat (Signed)
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Great start to a new year - a new chappie from you!!! I love how Harry seems so casual and at ease with Severus - who is gnashing his teeth over losing the intimidation factor with him! I am always up for more interaction between these two here!!
ROFL!
I don't know what else to say. I'm surprised no one came downstairs to ask why I was laughing madly.
And it is now officially Too Late to be reading. Good job.
And what is Harry up to, I wonder?
Incidentally, you have Harry was a Parseltongue. It should be Parselmouth, as I expect you know. (Parseltongue is the language, not the speaker.)
Moody is probably the only character who could realistically give Severus that lecture -- at least, and make it stick.
Lovely detail with the potion at the end to bring how crippled he is (for his line of work) into focus.
Oh, you have a typo in this chapter -- "strange" for "stranger" He now owed a nearly complete strange
Oh, very nice. I liked the suspense of the not-Draco bit.
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