| Title: I Don't Know Why I Go Walking at Night
| 20 Jul 2009 9:30 am
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| Reviewer: Shannon (Anonymous)
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I knew I recognized that line! :-) I'm a huge fan of M*A*S*H too. I'm really enjoying your story!
| Title: I'm a Searcher for Something
| 18 Jul 2009 5:45 am
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| Reviewer: LuKat (Signed)
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Thank you, thank you, thank you for the chapter!!! A difficult talk for the professor and Harry, for sure - for someone lacking great heaps of sensitivity Severus did pretty good! I am keen to hear how the horcrux mission goes - and how Harry is going to deal with his own!
I also loved the first part of the chapter and Snape's snakey activities - what fun to read about!
With regards to the ultimate structure of the story - I would prefer it all one story, but will follow you however you decide to deal with it.
Love this story!!
| Title: I'm a Searcher for Something
| 17 Jul 2009 11:13 pm
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| Reviewer: JAM (Anonymous)
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I am really enjoying this story. As to where to make separations, however, you should know that some of us are not familiar enough with the meaning behind the chapter titles for those to be important to us in the decision. I know it is important for you to feel comfortable with what you have written, but for some, it's the content of the chapters that is key.
| Title: I'm a Searcher for Something
| 17 Jul 2009 7:53 pm
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| Reviewer: Pandora (Signed)
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Poor Harry, what a difficult burden to bear. I'm glad that he's feeling more comfortable again with Snape.
However you decide to present part three, is fine with me, as long as you continue with it.
| Title: To the River so Deep
| 23 Jun 2009 8:39 am
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| Reviewer: zeraldaviperia (Anonymous)
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Really wonderfull story, you do your snape so well...
| Title: To The River so Deep
| 21 Jun 2009 12:11 am
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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"devoted little shadow you seem to have acquired" Oh that is too cute!!! I love there relationship, harry and Snape's, and Snape's and Moody to be honest. But I feel like harry snuck past Snape's guard very naturally, but slowly. i am off to read more, keep up the great work!
| Title: To the River so Deep
| 19 Jun 2009 2:21 pm
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| Reviewer: Doc Brown (Anonymous)
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I found your story and read it in almost one sitting. It is very, very good, all intense plot, and thick believable narration, and humour. I commiserate with Snape's lack of sleep so much right now! ^^
| Title: To the River so Deep
| 16 Jun 2009 5:38 am
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| Reviewer: le skrewt (Anonymous)
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Another excellent chapter! So glad to see this update. Love the Minerva/Severus banter in this one - your characterization of the teachers in this story is outstanding. And what a plot twist! Definitely was not expecting Severus to find out about the Horcruxes from Lucius, however indirectly! I am really looking forward to see where you take this - and intrigued that you're picking up the thread of the papers in the Chamber just now that you've revealed the news about the Horcruxes - very eager to see where this goes.
| Title: To the River so Deep
| 13 Jun 2009 5:10 pm
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| Reviewer: FAN (Anonymous)
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ARE YOU GOING TO CONTINUE? PLEASE DO! THIS IS AWESOME!
An update! I'm surprised, but happily so :D
Lots of Horcrux talk here, and I really can't imagine how Severus would go about suggesting to Harry he might be one... Not exactly something you want to here, eh? But, on the bright side McGonagall's got a plan forming and hopefully they'll succeed in their return to the Chamber. Wonder what they’ll find?
Sure hope to read more soon! This story still holds my interest ^_^
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