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Title: Chapter 32: The Softening of Severus Snape. 07 Oct 2008 11:01 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Yes, I am a member at Lily's Charm. I'm the one that has a handicapped son.

    I have a different name at ff.net because they wouldn't let me use Pandora, but now Obsidian (Tabitha) created me an original name combining my old name at ffnet. Silkysmoothe, and Pandora, and came up with PandoraSilk! Isn't she clever!

    Great story, and I cannot wait for these "revelations" to come to light, and the reactions that are sure to follow!

    Angst, excitement, warm fuzzies! You've got it all!

    Happy writing!

    Dawn

    Author's Response:

    Hey Dawn. I feel very sheepish that i had forgotten that you were Pandora and Silkysmoothe. It is now imbedded deeply, and if I see PandoraSilk come up anywhere, then I will know it is you.

    Thanks for getting back to me.

     ~LesleY~

Title: Chapter 32: The Softening of Severus Snape. 07 Oct 2008 8:32 pm
Reviewer: Natalie- (Anonymous) [Report This]
    great chapter :) i love how snape and harry are getting closer.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you Natalie...it is nice to see isn't it. But we will still see quite a bit of snarky Snape and angsty teenage HArry along the way. It wouldn't be Sev and HArry if they were always on such a high, would it. Hee hee.

     

    ~LesleY~

Title: Chapter 32: The Softening of Severus Snape. 07 Oct 2008 8:05 pm
Reviewer: AK Carmel (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Yay! You updated! Great job! Brilliant story!

    Author's Response:

    Glad you enjoyed it.

    ~LesleY~

Title: Chapter 32: The Softening of Severus Snape. 07 Oct 2008 5:09 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm a little confused, didn't I read this already/

    Oh, is it possible that this chapter was already posted on ff. net awhile ago, or am I going insane.

    Oh well, it's brilliant anyway, so I defintely don't mind reading it again!

    Great work, as usual. I hope that Sev and Harry's relationship continues to grow. I am really anxious for Harry and Sev to be able to be open about their relationship. I hope that you are planning at some point in the story for the relationship to come out in the open; I just can't wait for that day!

    Please update again soon,!

    Author's Response:

    Hi there Pandora. Of course, you are right. This has been posted on ff.net for a while now. I am ashamed to say that I  forgot to post it here and when I did admonish myself for the oversight, I was generally doing something else and couldn't get to it straight away, and hence, I would forget again. I know, I'm slack.

    I find the uploading process here a bit of a pain, and I now have to peruse the whole chapter as a preview because I have found that sometimes it doesn't upload exactly as I have written it. It takes a lot of time that I do not have in abundance at the moment.

    But you read it again!. Now that's dedication for you. Thank you. And don't worry...revelations are coming up.

    I know I am thick, but are you a member over at Lily's Charm? I thought I read somewhere that you sign in by a different name over there and on ff.net.

    ~LesleY~

Title: Chapter 32: The Softening of Severus Snape. 07 Oct 2008 4:51 pm
Reviewer: Polaris (Signed) [Report This]
    It's so difficult to represent Harry and Severus in character as well as having some emotional connection. You have definitely acheived it though, I really love the way you present their conversations and all the history and thought that's going into them.

    Looking forward to more!

    Author's Response:

    Thank you so much for your lovely words. I really appreciate your enjoyment of my story.

    ~LesleY~

Title: Chapter 31: Instincts or Idiocy! 27 Sep 2008 2:06 am
Reviewer: Missy Eye (Anonymous) [Report This]
    omg update update update!!!
    I hope you dont make Ron turn out to be a prick cuz that would really kill!
    i really hate stories that make ron out to be the bad guy and suddenly out of now where harry and draco are best friends, i mean get real!
    anyways great chapter
    i love this story for sooo many reasons!
    I have recently put up a halloween challenge and personally invite you to part take in it, if you have the time!

    thanks
    and update
    ASAP!

    I mean it...!!!

    Missy Eye

    Author's Response:

    I am trying to update as I am writing this response. But my muses are a little out of sync. at the moment I am afraid.

    So much so, that I do not think they would stretch to me trying to come up with a scenario for a third story at this time, so I think, for the moment at least, that I will have to pass on the challenge.

    I am sorry, and I do thank you for the personal invitation.

    Oh, BTW, I too hate stories where Ron turns out to be the bad guy and Draco takes his place. I loathe them with a passion, actually. I mean, AS IF! Ron is a hot head, but he is Harry's best mate and though he might blow, he always settles down and apologises. So don't worry on that score.

    ~LesleY~

Title: Chapter 30: Ginny's Dilemma. 27 Sep 2008 1:43 am
Reviewer: Missy Eye (Anonymous) [Report This]
    hahaha thats funny, geez, i thought it was something major, she just accused Ginny of being a gold digger...or maybe Unc. X died in some war..and she fears the same for harry?

    Author's Response:

    Ginny was upset because she is appalled to think that she might be like Muriel in any way, shape or form and specifically that HArry might think of her as a gold-digger.

    She is always fearful for HArry's welfare.

    ~LesleY~

Title: Chapter 29: Comfort and Confusion 27 Sep 2008 1:24 am
Reviewer: Missy Eye (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wow, this is a really good story!
    I wonder what's wrong with Ginny, I have a Harry/Ginny story i was wondering if you would read it?

    Author's Response:

    Hi there, Missy Eye. Thank you for reading ASD. I am very glad that you enjoyed it.

    I would love to read your H/G story, though if it is very long, I can't say how long it will take me as I am very busy with my own writing and real life. But if you want to send it to me, my e-mail is:

    wrappedinharry@yahoo.com.au.

    Do you just want me to read, or to beta as well?

    ~Lesley~

Title: Chapter 28: Happily Ever After??? 26 Sep 2008 9:43 am
Reviewer: ak carmel (Anonymous) [Report This]
    my favorite chapter so far
    i love this
    totally brilliant
    took a long way, but it was worth it to get to this point
    :)
    spectacular job.

    Ak Carmel

    Author's Response:

    Thank you. Glad you have enjoyed the story so far.

    ~LesleY~

Title: Chapter 15: The Wrath of Lord Voldemort 23 Sep 2008 8:13 am
Reviewer: ak carmel (Anonymous) [Report This]
    sorry i havent reviewed every chapter but this story is just brilliant! i love the dynamic that harry and snape have going! and its so canon, i can actually see things happening the way you relay them, i mean sometimes i feel that what harry says is a bit out of character, just some phrases but other than that this story is a fav! by far!!! I hope your still writing! I would love to read anything you wrote!

    Author's Response:

    Oh well, one more review is better than none. Thank you. I would love to have an example of where you think HArry is out of character. Perhaps it is something I need to attend to, though no-one else has commented.

    I am still writing and I do have another story, but not on this site. I'm not sure it qualifies, though I am beginning to think it does. I am also not sure whether I am allowed to give you a link to the story, but if you want to e-mail me, you are welcome.

    My e-mail address is: wrappedinharry@yahoo.com.au

    Might hear from you.

    ~LesleY~


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