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Title: Chapter 25: Pain and Suffering 18 Jul 2008 12:05 pm
Reviewer: SHEla WOLFsbane (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I wonder when Harry is going to make the connection that Remus was talking about Severus being his father. I like how aware Remus and Severus are of each other, and their lives. I look forward to seeing that "friendship" develope. Thanks again for all your hard work. Great stuff.

    Author's Response:

    You are doing a marathon effort with all of these reviews. It's fantastic reading all of your comments. You asked how long I was going to make the story...answer: I don't know. I am just basically going with the flow. And how often do I update: I aim for fortnightly and it is usually within a day or two either way of the fortnight.

    I have another work that is on ff.net and I alternate updating the two of them. At the moment, I am working on 'Severus Snape and the Muggle.' This story doesn't fit the criteria for P&S (I don't think) because although Harry and Severus both have major roles and there is a lot of interplay between them, the main interplay is between Sev and a OFC...a muggle. You might want to check it out when you finish chapter 28 of ASD

    ~LesleY~

Title: Chapter 22: Have We Reached An Accord? 18 Jul 2008 9:18 am
Reviewer: SHEla WOLFsbane (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow, is Harry ever angry. It's all understandable, and you do a great job making us sympathetic to Harry even when he is raging. Gotta give Severus props for keeping a "cool" head.
Title: Chapter 20: Back to the Burrow 18 Jul 2008 9:10 am
Reviewer: SHEla WOLFsbane (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Yup- the last review was me. I took a break while reading the chapter and I must have been logged out. I didn't realize it at first, so the security code didn't get entered the first time. Lack of sleep made me forget to sign my name the second time... And yes, thank you, I did manage to get some sleep. I tend to do marathon reading sometimes. And this is worth it. Looking forward to more. I do have a question for you though, since I'm reading this almost straight through... How often do you update, on average, and how long do you think this will be?
Title: Chapter 20: Back to the Burrow 18 Jul 2008 2:30 am
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Awww, you're going to make me cry. You have a way of making Harry's pain stand out. Well done. That last part was great. Makes me think that Severus is really, really glad he can hide his thoughts as well as he does.
Title: Chapter 19: Godric's Hollow 18 Jul 2008 1:46 am
Reviewer: SHEla WOLFsbane (Signed) [Report This]
    You write a "lost" Harry very well. And all the pacing the Severus does, works well. It's not over done. There is a nice balance you have going on here. I look forward to reading more of it.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks again SHEla. You are doing a marathon job here.

    I take it that the anonymous reviewer for chapter 20 is you also. How come it ended up being anonymous?

    Anyway, not important. I am just thrilled that you are still enjoying it all.

    ~LesleY~

Title: Chapter 16: Secrets Will Out. 18 Jul 2008 12:07 am
Reviewer: SHEla WOLFsbane (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Ohh, great stuff. Not how I saw that happening at all. Who needs sleep anyway. This is great. Now onto the next chapter...

    Author's Response:

    You seem to be getting through this at a cracking pace. I hope you did finally get some sleep.

    Thank you sooo much for letting me know about the chapters as you go along. I hope you continue to be entertained,

    ~LesleY~

Title: Chapter 13: Fight and Flight. 17 Jul 2008 10:07 pm
Reviewer: SHEla WOLFsbane (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Even knowing what the future chapters are called didn't help the unease that Severus, and Harry must be feeling at the end of this chapter. Nicely done. Yet another thing about Harry for Severus to ponder. On to the next chapter. Thanks for the great read.

    Author's Response:

    Sorry SHEla. I seemed to miss responding to this. Better late than never to let you know I appreciate your review.

    ~LesleY~

Title: Chapter 12: Half a Truth is Better Than None. 17 Jul 2008 9:11 pm
Reviewer: SHEla WOLFsbane (Signed) [Report This]
    Awww! Great chapter! I liked the interaction between the two of them.
Title: Chapter 11: Confession 17 Jul 2008 8:34 pm
Reviewer: SHEla WOLFsbane (Signed) [Report This]
    I am disappointed in myself that it has taken me this long to start reading this story. I have no good reason, other than it wasn't finished, and I didn't want to get hooked only to be left hanging. Which really isn't a good reason. I good read, is a good read. Thank you for all the time, effort, and detail you've put into this. I look forward to reading more. And seeing as how I have more than ten chapters ahead of me, I better get cracking. Thanks again for a great read.

    SHEla WOLFsbane
Title: Chapter 28: Happily Ever After??? 17 Jul 2008 12:26 pm
Reviewer: SHEla WOLFsbane (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Hello again,
    Actually I just started reading this yesterday. I'm just starting chapter 8, but already I'm hooked. I'll try to get better about leaving reviews.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks for getting back to me, SHEla. I'm glad that you found the story and that you are enjoying it.

    ~LesleY~


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