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Title: Chapter 14 12 Jun 2008 10:07 pm
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Another excellent chapter! I'm glad that Severus is noticing that Harry is acting so submissive and not challenging. Hopefully he'll clarify to Harry that he doesn't really consider the boy his slave. Hope you can update again soon! :)

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Severus really is noticing more about Harry's character, now that he's open to really seeing him.  He'll try to help Harry, but again, it's going to take a little time.  For one thing, Severus doesn't realise how dangerously depressed Harry is, and for another being open about his emotions is new and difficult for him...he's working on it, but he'll have to be pretty shaken up before he really opens up.
Title: Chapter 14 12 Jun 2008 9:45 pm
Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed) [Report This]
    I can't resist big puppy dog eyes, lol. But I was going to review anyway. Great chapter, I love how far Severus has come. From the sneering git to actually making jokes with Harry no less and saying that Draco shoulb be punished. Where did his old self go and can wemake sure it never comes back? LOl,he only different in some aspects, he still the stern potions master I love but he woukd now make a great father to Harry. Is tis going to be a father son fic? Adoptive? Well, I really like it. Any angst to look forward to? I wish I had made the chapters last longer so I would not have to wait for more, lol. Thanks for the update!

    Author's Response: Thank you, Scorpia!  Severus really has changed a lot, hasn't he?  And he'll change even more before it's over.  Yes, I do plan for Severus to adopt Harry at some point in the future...that will be a key element in helping Harry to begin to see that the slavery spell doesn't have to define the rest of his life.  
Title: Chapter 14 12 Jun 2008 9:38 pm
Reviewer: Keina (Signed) [Report This]
    I love your story ! and I can totally feel and understand the despair ofHarry, his will to give up as quickly as possible. It's going to be so hard for Snape to make that change! Please update soon :-)

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Harry is so depressed right now, you're right that Severus is going to have a hard time helping him to come out of it.  Fortunately, Severus is quite stubborn when he wants to be though. 
Title: Chapter 14 12 Jun 2008 8:40 pm
Reviewer: Mimiheart (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow. I really, really, like this. :D

    Author's Response: Thank you!
Title: Chapter 14 12 Jun 2008 7:43 pm
Reviewer: Tasha (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I just want to let you know that I really enjoy your story. Keep up the good work

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I'm so glad you do.
Title: Chapter 14 12 Jun 2008 7:26 pm
Reviewer: Morgansnape87 (Signed) [Report This]
    Good story! Keep it up

    Author's Response: Thank you!
Title: Chapter 14 12 Jun 2008 7:14 pm
Reviewer: Kaity (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Sorry! I forgot to tell you that I'm not in town right now!! I don't see any problems here though, lol. I'll catch the next one!

    Author's Response: That's okay, Kaity, I know you've got a busy summer planned.  Thanks!
Title: Chapter 14 12 Jun 2008 6:12 pm
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    aww that was so cute! i absolutly love when severus has a change of heart and does things like putting harry to bed, makes me all fuzzy inside! that said, im looking forward to seeing how he deals with his crying in the night, a little hug maybe? cute!

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Yep, I love softie Sev, too.  I'm not sure if they're ready for a real hug yet, but we'll see...
Title: Chapter 14 12 Jun 2008 5:37 pm
Reviewer: Elise_Malfoy (Signed) [Report This]
    Gah! Why why hwy must youtorture me with cliffies!
    But really, this was a great chapter. I love Harry, eh's just so perfectly written.
    What's gonna happen with Harry?
    It's a nightmare, right?
    Well, please update again soon!
    -Elise

    Author's Response: Because cliffies are fun!  You know you love them, Elise!  Thank you! 
Title: Chapter 14 12 Jun 2008 5:30 pm
Reviewer: iluvchocs (Signed) [Report This]
    *responds to the puppy-dog eyes, even though I own a labrador and should know better*

    It's really good to read a story by an author who thinks things through - I hadn't considered that Harry would be unable to attack Severus due to the spell, but you have, and you have a solution, not a *let's forget about that and create a plot hole so I can do what I want* situation. I applaud you.

    Good job on this chapter - will Remus feature in this as a more central character, or will he just disappear from Harry's life again?

    Author's Response:

    Puppy-dog eyes are hard to resist, aren't they?  We have a little beagle with the sweetest face and the biggest brown eyes...it's a good thing she's not clever enough to be manipulative because otherwise she could rule the world!

    Thank you!  I do try to have things planned out.  Course I'm not perfect, or a full-time writer who can devote hours to it, so sometimes things do slip by me, but I try.

    Remus will be in the story later, I think (or in the sequel) , but probably more of a minor character.  


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