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Title: Chapter 13 12 Jun 2008 10:31 am
Reviewer: Kelly (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great chapter!!!
    And congrats on being a featured story
    Did you make up the history of the snitch? That was really well done!

    Author's Response: Thank you!  No, I didn't make up the snitch history; I read about it on the HP Lexicon site, but I'm glad you liked it!
Title: Chapter 13 11 Jun 2008 1:53 am
Reviewer: Nightshade (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Sorry to bug u but i had a question; i was reading the story again and a thought came to me. Snapes probably going to be VERY depressed that Harry's really only living so he can off Voldie the off himself. Do you plan to make this happen slowly or all at once? I was just really curious. But u know what hey say ' curiosity killed the cat, but satisfaction brought him back.'
    Aagin, sorry to nag and bug you. And also GREAT JOB on the story. Aswell as PP.
    THANKS!

    Author's Response:

    Hi, Nightshade,

    You aren't bothering me at all!  I'm just not sure if I can answer your question without giving away spoilers for the story.  I'm not entirely sure I understand your question...are you asking if Harry will kill Voldemort and immediately attempt suicide?  Are you asking will Harry actually make a real attempt or instead will he slowly deteriorate until he's reached a dangerous point?  As for the timeline...it's kind of hard for me to say how quickly things will happen because often I'll start writing and things will end up taking longer than I'd planned.  Thanks again! 

Title: Chapter 13 09 Jun 2008 10:55 am
Reviewer: Miranda (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This story is just awesome!!The plot is suspenseful,original, and interesting. The writing is excellent. I really hope you update soon and I'm looking forward to when they get back to Hogwarts.You'll make a fantastic author!This is certainly a fic nobody will forget.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I'm so happy you're enjoying it.  I'm working on the next chapter now, so hopefully it'll be ready soon.
Title: Chapter 13 06 Jun 2008 8:03 am
Reviewer: Elfwyn (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I meant to ask, what is happening with Draco? Surely this is an offense, like assault in our world. You would think expulsion would be the least--after all all these kids have a potentially lethal weapon in their hands and there must be serious rules for the misuse while on school grounds; to the extent that not even the Headmaster could not or should not cover something like this up.

    Author's Response:

    Ah, Draco...good question.  At the very beginning, I did plan for Draco to be expelled, but I soon realised that I needed him at Hogwarts later in the story, so I changed my mind about that.  What he did is a very serious offense, and he could be sent to Azkaban for it.  But the situation is being kept quiet, not so much for Draco's sake right now as for Harry's.  DD believes it could be dangerous for Voldemort to learn of the spell  (Would it really?  I don't know, but for plot reasons, I want the spell to be a secret for now so that's the reason I'm using).  DD also knows that if Draco Malfoy were expelled from school and possibly put on trial, there would be publicity and questions, so he's decided not to go that route.  Also, there is a little bit of him wanting to give Draco another chance and believing that he can be redeemed.  For better or worse, that is one of DD's characteristics.

    Draco is not going to get off scot-free though.  DD never told him he wouldn't be punished, only that he was thinking about what would be appropriate.  Draco will be in the fic more later on, and he will come to understand what a horrible thing he did to Harry.  Thanks again! 

Title: Chapter 13 06 Jun 2008 7:57 am
Reviewer: Elfwyn (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Very emotional. I think this site should have hankie symbols for their stories or chapters. Poor Harry. I wonder though how Snape would feel if Harry went around saying yes, master and no, master. That might drive home just what Harry is feeling.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Yes, you're right.  Severus has realised that Harry is depressed, but he still doesn't really understand how devestated Harry truly is.  He'll learn eventually, and be determined to help him, but not just yet.
Title: Chapter 13 02 Jun 2008 9:32 pm
Reviewer: lily (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I just started reading your story and I loved it so much I couldnt stop until I got here. I think that Harry's submissiveness is also a product of his depression and suicidal thoughts so its not OOC in the context of your story. I like the way that Snape is trying so hard to please Harry and to get him to smile. I really love this story and please continue to update!

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I'm really happy you're enjoying it.  Thank you for your comments on Harry.  I could see him being this way, and I'm glad you can, too.  I'm working on the next chapter of my other story right now, but then I'll get back to SC.
Title: Chapter 13 02 Jun 2008 5:47 am
Reviewer: KimSpiritTalks (Signed) [Report This]
    Excellent chapter, like the others. I love your Snape and how he relates to Harry. I love how satisfied he was to see Harry happy. And you did the flying scene very well!

    Author's Response: Thank you, Kim!  I couldn't do this without you and Kaity and Ivanova!  I'm glad you like Severus; I enjoy writing him and Harry, and I'm so looking forward to the future, when Severus is really trying to make Harry happy.
Title: Chapter 13 30 May 2008 7:21 am
Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed) [Report This]
    There is going to be a sequel? Yippee! Please update when ever possible, I can't wait for more! Severus is being so great right now, it makes me feel all happy, lol. And I REALLY want to hug Harrym the poor dear. Severus needs to hug Harry, (hint hint), lol.

    Author's Response: Thank you so much, Scorpia!  Harry does need a hug, for sure.  I don't know that Severus is ready for it yet, but Harry will get his share of hugs in the future, how about that?
Title: Chapter 12 30 May 2008 7:12 am
Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed) [Report This]
    Snape is making things up to Harry, I'm so proud of him, lol. The line about how Hary did not want Sirius's money, he wanted Sirius made me smile. I bet I look like a werido reading your story and laughing, smiling at my computer screen. Only one more chapteer to go before I am caught up, :( BOO!
    So I'll say this now, update ASAP, PLEASE? Great story, I really enjoyed reading whay you have writeen so far.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Severus is really trying.  I'm glad you're enjoying it!
Title: Chapter 11 30 May 2008 7:01 am
Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed) [Report This]
    I like how Snape keeps surprising Harry, lol. It's kind of funny. I hope Harry does not try to kill himself, :( I really don't like suicide anything but so far this story has been okay. :)

    Author's Response: Having to see that he was wrong about Harry was a huge change for Severus, and he wants to begin making amends but it is hard for him at the same time.  As for Harry, well, I don't want to give too much away, but he does spiral pretty far before Severus realises how dangerously depressed he is.  But I do also love a happy ending. 

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