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Reviews For Slave Child
Title: Chapter 10 30 May 2008 6:52 am
Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm glad Snape swallowed his pride, :)
    I like the way you made events from the next book melt in perfectly with this story.

    Author's Response: Thanks again!  There will be a few things from the next book (like one or two) but for the most part it will be very different from HBP...lots of big stuff happening over the summer will make it different.
Title: Chapter 9 30 May 2008 6:36 am
Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed) [Report This]
    I accept your offer of candy, lol. Love my sweets, got any truffles or lemon heads? Anyway I found one mistake, feel and it should of been fell. Nothing major, your lucky to have three beta's. Great story!

    Author's Response: Oh, I've got a huge sweet tooth!  Thank you!
Title: Chapter 8 30 May 2008 6:25 am
Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed) [Report This]
    The truth comes out! Yay! Great chapter, I really felt for poor Harry. I can not WAIT to read the next chapter, off to read!

    Author's Response: Thank you!  It was a hard chapter to write, but necessary too.
Title: Chapter 7 30 May 2008 6:16 am
Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed) [Report This]
    Thanks to another brilliant cliff-hanger I forgot what I was going to say...oh yeah. If Severus would of put his stuff away this whole mess would not of happened, but I like messes, (grin). Sevy should leave all his toys scattered around the room, lol. Zan's protectivness over Harry made me smile, I love him already!

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Yep, Severus did mess up this time and even he will have to admit it.  Zan is a sweetie, though much quieter than Norie who is a little fireball!
Title: Chapter 6 30 May 2008 6:06 am
Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed) [Report This]
    If I was not a fan of cliff-hangers I might be mad....Luckily I adore cliff-hangers and the authors who write them as wonderfully as you do. Will this book Romano be a part of the plot? Or did it just do it's part?

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I think the Romano book has served its purpose after this episode, but you never know...
Title: Chapter 5 30 May 2008 5:55 am
Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed) [Report This]
    Your sense of humor came out it in this chapter, I enjoyed the few humorus comments like the 'snowball in hell' and Snape's dialogue. You write Snape well, I like him so far! I LOVE Norie and Zan! Seriously my favorite houseelves I have read about in fan fiction so far. I like how there old because I think it makes them more interesting, their polite but not over-eager.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I'm glad you like Norie and Zan.  It's funny because I almost didn't put them in the story, but then I thought they were needed to kind of be a bridge between Harry and Severus in the beginning, and it seemed to make sense to have them there on a nice big estate like Prince Hall.
Title: Chapter 4 30 May 2008 5:24 am
Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed) [Report This]
    Now it was time to wake Potter and destroy his life. LOl, that comment seemed so casual, do you normaly destroy peoples lifes in your stories? (wink) Great job, that would of been a very funny joke on Snape to tell him Harry is his slave, lol.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Do I normally destroy characters' lives?  Well, not as much as some authors, I think, lol. 
Title: Chapter 3 30 May 2008 5:11 am
Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed) [Report This]
    AHHHHHHHH! Wow, what a line to end a chapter with! I'm in shock, kinda hopingh he would be enslaved to Draco but Severus has not been done before (as far as I know). Cool idea!

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I am quite bad about cliffhangers.  Harry enslaved to Draco could be interesting, but I just really wanted to develop a father/son relationship between Harry and Sev, and that would be harder if Harry were Draco's slave, I think. 
Title: Chapter 2 30 May 2008 5:02 am
Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed) [Report This]
    I sadly can't remember if I have R&R'd this chapter yet. I planned on reading this story last week but that did not happen. Great job so far, I like your Albus. A lot of Authors make him out to be a blabberling fool and I find that SO annoying. Albus is a great character and you write him very well. Grr, I love Draco but he really needs some disipline, you have beeen a VERY bad boy Draco! Lol, can't wait to read more and see exactly why the title is Slave Child. Great title by the way, I got shivers when I just typed it, (snicker).

    Author's Response:

    Hi, and thank you!  Glad you like Albus.  Isn't it wonderful how JKR created all these fascinating characters that people can have such different opinions of...some people see DD as wise and kind, others see him as cold and manipulative, some can't imagine there being a drop of kindness in Snape, etc.  I admire her so much, for despite some flaws, her world and her characters are so incredibly rich and complex and multi-layered.

    I have to admit that I never could like Draco in canon, but I have seen him portrayed more sympathetically in some very well-written fanfics, so I thought I'd see if I could do anything with him, lol.  He does need his comeuppance though.  Glad you liked the title!  It came to me, but at first I wanted something more deep and profound, lol.  Never could think of anything though, so Slave Child stuck.

Title: Chapter 13 30 May 2008 4:36 am
Reviewer: Snapesthe1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I think the formality around Snape is natural given Harry's current depression and fear. He doesn't really trust Snape and he doesn't see any hope for a future. He's living for his death.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  "He's living for his death."---that expresses it perfectly!  It's the lack of hope for the future that has made Harry fixate on being with Sirius and his parents...that's the only happiness he sees in the future, at least for right now.  Thankfully, Severus will be determined to make him see otherwise.

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