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Title: Chapter 11 27 Apr 2008 4:18 am
Reviewer: Cecilia Farrell (Signed) [Report This]
    Ohhh, i know you already know but that was a little short! a bit of a filler, i really really like it, its got a certain rigid off feeling about it the whole atmosphere, a kind of stilfing sadness to it. I wonder when they'll find out what Harry's up to, and whether he'll mobilise his plans while he's with Snape? but if he can't be more than a certain distance away and for a certain amount of time how is he going to off Voldie? Perhaps he could side apparate with Snape to a death eater meetin, can't see that going down too well. Oh well. Please please give us more. Can't wait for the next chapter!!!

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Voldie will make his appearance before summer is over.  I'm still working on the details, but I have the general idea of it already planned.  Hopefully it will live up to expectations, though I admit I'm more focused on Severus, Harry, and the emotional angsty side of things.
Title: Chapter 10 20 Apr 2008 11:41 am
Reviewer: Êñåíÿ (Anonymous) [Report This]
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Title: Chapter 10 17 Apr 2008 10:23 pm
Reviewer: Nightshade (Anonymous) [Report This]
    GREAT JOB!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please update soon, this was a really good chapter.
    I had a question though; i may have missed it but how did snape know that the dursleys grabbed and shook harry? Also, how are norie and zane going to react to learning (unless they already know) that it was sev's fault that harry was hurt?
    thanks for reading and writing.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you! Sev knew that the Dursleys shook Harry because in Harry's medical records Poppy had noted that he had suspicious bruises on his arms when he returned to school every September (and Harry always had poor excuses for the bruises). It isn't outright stated that the Dursleys shook Harry viciously, but I think Sev is smart enough to put two and two together, especially since he met Harry's relatives and knows that they despised him.

    Norie and Zan know what happened, and they have been upset. They'll be more of them in chapter 11.

Title: Chapter 10 17 Apr 2008 1:21 am
Reviewer: sunsethill (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm glad that Harry is noticing Snape's behaviour. And it looks as if your Dumbledore is not dying anymore, that your Snape was able to completely cure him. That should make some more things different from HBP.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Yeah, Harry's noticed Severus' behavior; he just doesn't know what to make of it.  And Dumbles is all better now, you're right about that.  Thanks again!
Title: Chapter 10 15 Apr 2008 10:45 am
Reviewer: iluvchocs (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great job on this chapter - I really like the way all of your characters are reacting to the situation; it's very IC.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I'm glad you think so!
Title: Chapter 10 15 Apr 2008 5:41 am
Reviewer: b_e_skrewt (Signed) [Report This]
    This just gets better with each chapter.

    Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Title: Chapter 10 15 Apr 2008 5:09 am
Reviewer: KimSpiritTalks (Signed) [Report This]
    What a fantastic chapter! The best yet! I'm sorry you aren't able to get email to me, I don't know why that is. But you're doing really well without me. This was a great chapter!

    Author's Response: Thank you, Kim!  I'm going to try to PM you again, and see if my computer is still being ornery...I sure it will straighten out soon!
Title: Chapter 10 15 Apr 2008 4:29 am
Reviewer: Elise_Malfoy (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, absolutely wonderful! I love it! :)

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I'm so glad you like it!
Title: Chapter 10 15 Apr 2008 3:36 am
Reviewer: PyroChilde (Signed) [Report This]
    Wonderful chapter! I love how you write Harry's thoughts and emotions, though reading them breaks my heart. You're really talented!!

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Yeah, Harry is in a dark place right now, and it will be a while before it gets better, but it'll come.
Title: Chapter 10 15 Apr 2008 3:10 am
Reviewer: Morgansnape87 (Signed) [Report This]
    Whooo its good keep it up

    Author's Response: Thanks!  Glad you liked it!

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