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Title: Chapter 9 01 Apr 2008 12:18 pm
Reviewer: iluvchocs (Anonymous) [Report This]
    *eats sweets* Why thankyou. Great job on this chapter - I can't wait to see what happens when Harry and Severus are alone in the manor again.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Things should start to get a bit better for Harry and Sev, but they still have a ways to go.
Title: Chapter 8 31 Mar 2008 10:43 pm
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, what a mistake!!! Poor, poor Harry.

    Fabulous chapter, fabulous story!! Please update soon!

    Author's Response: Thanks, Jan!  Chapter 9 is done, but I'm waiting to hear back from all my betas...I know they're all very busy with RL stuff right now, so we'll see. 
Title: Chapter 8 29 Mar 2008 4:06 am
Reviewer: MoonLightSilver (Anonymous) [Report This]
    PLEASE OH PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!
    You are doing a wonderfull job. Any chance of you makeing the next chapter long? And i was wondering, is Harry going to try to OFF HIMSELF soon? And what will Sev, Norie and Zan do about it. I'm just assuming that Norie and Zan will be a BIG help to Sev and Harry becoming close. I may be wrong, am I?
    Thank you for reading my review and for writing the story.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I'll try to make the next chapter a little longer...mostly I just write til it's a good stopping point.  Harry is going to start thinking about suicide soon, but not actually do anything yet.  Thank you for reading and leaving a review! 
Title: Chapter 8 28 Mar 2008 5:46 pm
Reviewer: lisas_castle (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow, this story is awesome too! I can't wait to see what happens next! :)

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Glad you like it!
Title: Chapter 8 28 Mar 2008 11:27 am
Reviewer: bkerrmom1 (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow... That is goung to be one serious guilt trip!! Excellent as always!

    Author's Response: Yeah, very serious guilt trip, huh?  Thank you! 
Title: Chapter 8 28 Mar 2008 8:33 am
Reviewer: Keina (Signed) [Report This]
    Awesome chapter ! I just can't wait to see how Snape will react to that piece of information ! Please update soon, this story is really great !

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I'm working on chapter 9 now, hopefully it can be up in another few days. 
Title: Chapter 8 28 Mar 2008 2:41 am
Reviewer: Nightshade (Anonymous) [Report This]
    ANOTHER CLIFF HANGER?! JEEZ!!! THREE IN A ROW!! PLEASE OH PLEASE, I'D LIKE TO LIVE TO READ THE ENTIRE STORY!!! I agree and respect you reasons for these cliff hangers, HOWEVER, its still torture for your loyal fans.
    I really like how you wrote this chapter. Boy is Sev in for it! (May Merlin, Albus, Minerva, Norie, Zan, Poppy, and all of Harry's other friends have mercy on him!!)LOL!!!!!!
    If I were Harry I'd be terrified of so much as hearing Severus Snape's name. First he threatns to beat and starve him, refuses to listen to Harry's side of the story, Now THIS!! Sev's due for a long journey down GUILT LANE. Ohwell.
    Thanks for reading and writing!!

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I know, I know, I'm bad with cliffies...*ducks rotten fruit*  but at least I don't make you wait for a couple years to see how things turn out like Jo Rowling did!  Right?  Yeah, it's going to be interesting between Harry and Severus now.  Severus has to admit that he's been wrong (finally), and Harry begins to think that death might be better than living at Severus' mercy.   
Title: Chapter 8 28 Mar 2008 1:46 am
Reviewer: b_e_skrewt (Signed) [Report This]
    i was wondering when he was going to figure it out!! good chapter... can hardly wait to see what he's going to do with the knowledge...

    Author's Response: Thank you!  What will Sev do now?  That's the tricky part, but it should make him rethink some things.
Title: Chapter 8 28 Mar 2008 1:10 am
Reviewer: SnowStalker (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow! Another wonderful chapter! I can't believe you ended it like that, though!! ...Or maybe I can, since the last chapter was actually a worse cliffhanger. Though I'm glad Snape's apparently realized his absolutely hugely horrendous mistake; I'd been wondering if Poppy would mention the incident or if Severus would actually give Harry a chance to explain. I'm just wondering what the rest of Snape's reaction will be, and of course Poppy won't be at all happy when she finds out...I also liked how Snape's emotions are in conflict, and he doesn't know what to think or feel--it's the first step towards him seeing Harry, instead of James Potter reborn (except for the eyes, of course). Anyway, thanks for the chapter and update soon!!

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Yeah, Severus has taken the first step towards realising he's been wrong about Harry...a very hard thing for him to admit, which is why I made this so horrible for poor Harry.  I hated to do it, but I thought Severus would have to be really shaken up to see that he'd been wrong.  Otherwise, he'd have probably just avoided Harry as much as possible and it would have taken years before they'd gotten to know one another.  I don't think I'm patient enough to drag it out for years.
Title: Chapter 8 28 Mar 2008 12:28 am
Reviewer: PyroChilde (Anonymous) [Report This]
    AHHHHHH!! Evil cliffhanger! Awesome chapter! I loved seeing Harry's pov and I sooo can't wait until the next chapter. I really wanna see the emotional fallout after this!

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Yeah, some emotional fallout is due, isn't it? 

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