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Reviews For Slave Child
Title: Chapter 7 16 Mar 2008 5:07 pm
Reviewer: Trueangelofdark (Signed) [Report This]
    2 clifhangers in 2 day!! You do realise that if you give us all heart attacks there won't be anybody to read your stories!!! Please update soon *puppy dog eyes* I don't think my heart can stand the strain of not knowing what's going to happen .I reallly love this story. :D Love Elle.

    Author's Response: I know, I'm bad about the cliffhangers.  *puppy dog eyes right back at ya*  But it keeps things exciting, doesn't it?  I'm going to try to begin chapter 8 tonight.
Title: Chapter 7 16 Mar 2008 4:05 pm
Reviewer: iluvchocs (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This story is riveting - I'm completely hooked. I really love the way you describe the events, and everyone's reactions seem really believable. Great job XD

    Author's Response: Thank you so much!  I'm glad you're enjoying it! 
Title: Chapter 7 16 Mar 2008 3:35 pm
Reviewer: rosworms (Signed) [Report This]
    omg! you leave it like that! sheesh... i was expecting like chemical burns on harry's hands or something but not that. you sure know how to keep me wanting more.

    Author's Response: Thanks!  No, not chemical burns on skin...that'd be too easy to fix with a potion, you know.  We've got to make Sev feel really guilty and angsty (if that's a word).   
Title: Chapter 7 16 Mar 2008 3:13 pm
Reviewer: Keina (Signed) [Report This]
    More more more *puppy eyes* want moooore ! I love your story, I can't wait to see how Harry will be, and how Severus will react ! please update sooon !

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Well, let's just say there should be plenty of angst coming up!
Title: Chapter 6 16 Mar 2008 6:25 am
Reviewer: rosworms (Signed) [Report This]
    yikes! poor harry... doesn't snape know what it means when you 'assume' things? can't wait for more!

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Chapter 7 will be up today, but I'm afraid it'll probably be another week or so before I can get chapter 8 up. 
Title: Chapter 6 16 Mar 2008 2:00 am
Reviewer: sunsethill (Signed) [Report This]
    Well, I guess we needed something to get them talking to each other. Nice to see an update on this so soon.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Yeah, this whole incident with the journal will be a turning point.  Thanks again! 
Title: Chapter 6 15 Mar 2008 10:40 pm
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter and it's too bad neither of them are talking to each other though. It's interesting that Sev freed his elves and I'm looking forward to hearing more about Jeremiah, whoever he is.

    I like the idea of Severus's journal and it looks like they're going to have some kind of confrontation over the journal. Oh boy! Update soon!

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I think it's one of Severus' better characteristics that he doesn't want anyone to be his slave, not the elves and not Harry, much as he despises Harry right now.  Jeremiah was a mean one, for sure.  There'll probably be little mentions of him here and there.  Thanks and I'll try!
Title: Chapter 6 15 Mar 2008 9:54 pm
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    HI!!!!!! I've already read chapters 6 and 7 on another site, and i wanted to tell you your doing a GREAT JOB!!!! (BIG SMILEY FACE)I was wondering if you could give us readers an idea about how long it's going to take for Sev to discover that it was Pomfery who took the journal out and not Harry?
    Again really good job on slave child and potions proffesor.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Severus will probably find out in chapter 8.  I'm really glad you're enjoying the stories!
Title: Chapter 5 05 Mar 2008 11:46 pm
Reviewer: SnowStalker (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow! Absolutely amazing! I'll admit, I was a little aprehensive about reading a "slavery" fic, but you've done very well with it. *shudders* I can't even begin to imagine myself in that position, and I feel sorry for both of them. I can't help but wonder how they'll both manage to survive for any length of time...Anyway, it's very good, keep it up! Please update soon!!

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I know a lot of people have doubts about a 'slavery' fic, and that's why I did say from the beginning that this story was about sensitive issues, but I really am trying to handle them with respect and I'm glad if someone is willing to give it a chance.  Harry and Severus are both in a bad situation now, Harry especially, but things will eventually get better for them.  I'll try to update as soon as I can.
Title: Chapter 5 04 Mar 2008 10:14 am
Reviewer: beckettsgirl (Signed) [Report This]
    I really like this story!!! I wasn't 100% sure when I started, nut I gave it a shot and I really like it! (and can't wait for an update!!) :)

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I'm really glad you gave it a chance, and hope you'll continue to enjoy it!  I'll try to update soon, but I have to work on my other story, "Potions Professor" first.

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