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Title: Chapter 5 25 Feb 2008 3:59 am
Reviewer: lunaz (Anonymous) [Report This]
    My heart just goes out to poor Harry. His fears and sorrows come across strongly in this chapter. By the end of this update I wanted to reach out to Harry give him a hug and adopt him into the family. Draco on the other hand I wanted to just smack him one. I hope he gets punished for doing an unknown spell onto Harry.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I know, crazy as it sounds, I'm finding it hard to write some of this, just because I feel so badly for Harry.  But I just keep reminding myself that he'll be all right in the end.  I do have plans for Draco, and it may not exactly be a 'punishment' per se, but he's in for a rough time, too.
Title: Chapter 5 25 Feb 2008 3:19 am
Reviewer: b_e_skrewt (Signed) [Report This]
    Good chapter! Poor Harry... he is in shock. And I don't think Snape's doing much better. Thank goodness for house elves :)

    Author's Response: Thank you!  You're right about both Harry and Severus...they are still in shock and trying to come to terms with how their lives have changed.
Title: Chapter 5 25 Feb 2008 2:54 am
Reviewer: Azalea (Signed) [Report This]
    yay great chapter kristeh! Love this story! =)

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I'm so happy you do!  I have to admit, I love it too, lol!
Title: Chapter 5 25 Feb 2008 2:52 am
Reviewer: Emilie D (Signed) [Report This]
    I loved this chapter. It's perfectly believable to me that Harry would be stricken by this news and uncertain how to act. Prince Hall can't be what he expected… I can't wait to see what happens next.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I'm glad you find Harry believable here.  I know I would be very uncertain how to act in his position.  No, Prince Hall isn't what he expected, and I'll try to update as soon as I can, but I do need to finish the next chapter for "Potions Professor" first.
Title: Chapter 5 25 Feb 2008 2:39 am
Reviewer: Wolverine (Signed) [Report This]
    poor harry. I hope Norie is right and snape will eventually learn to at least tolerate him. great chapter.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Oh, I think it's a safe bet that Severus will learn to tolerate Harry in the end.  Glad you liked it!
Title: Chapter 5 25 Feb 2008 2:16 am
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    GREAT JOB!!! I LOVED THIS CHAPTER!!!!!!
    AGAIN GREAT WORK!

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Title: Chapter 5 25 Feb 2008 1:54 am
Reviewer: CraftyMomChick (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm enjoying your new story very much, as I have your others. This one made me want to cry for Harry at the end of this chapter. Looking forward to future updates on this and Potions Professor.

    Author's Response: Thank you very much.  Yeah, Harry is having a very difficult time now, poor kid.
Title: Chapter 5 25 Feb 2008 1:43 am
Reviewer: sunsethill (Signed) [Report This]
    Harry's total shock at the turn of events comes through very clearly in this. I don't think he's OOC--he's totally numb. And I think I might try to curb my temper, too, if I knew I could die from losing it. It will be interesting to watch both Severus and Harry learn the bounds of this spell. I still love the two house elves and fully expect them to light into Severus the first time he's cruel. And what a horrible responsibility this really is to a nasty but good man like Snape.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you!  I'm glad you can understand how Harry feels now.  I hope you will find it all interesting, I know I've got some scenes planned that I'm looking forward to writing, at least.  I love Norie and Zan, too, and it's kind of funny, because I debated about whether to put them in the story at first, but I think they can help Harry a bit, especially now when Severus isn't ready to be there for him yet. 

    And you're right, that it is hard for Severus, too, and not just because he's got to re-adjust the solitary lifestyle he's grown accustomed to, but because it is a moral dilemma for him.  He doesn't want to have a slave, but he has to, and it's the 'Potter brat' that he can't stand, but he also can't help feeling twinges of sympathy for.  He doesn't want to abuse Harry, and is trying to give him the respect that all people deserve, but he can't bring himself to be nice or gracious about it.  Severus has a lot of room to grow here.   

Title: Chapter 1 23 Feb 2008 2:51 am
Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed) [Report This]
    Leave the reader in suspense why don't ya!! Lol, great first chapter, the readers who had to wait for the second chapter might no agree with me though. I love cliff hangers! Very good but is this a multple POV story? If not you might want to watch out. Great job!

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I'll probably go back and forth between Harry's and Severus' POV, though I think it'll eventually be more from Harry's.
Title: Chapter 4 23 Feb 2008 1:56 am
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Hi. I know i reviewed you before. But while i was reading it again, some questions came to mind. Will harry tell sev what the dursleys did to him in the past?
    And i noticed you mentioned how angry severus had been after the pensieve incedent. (sorry for any spelling errors, grammer and spelling aren't my best traits.)Back to the question, was that a hint that Sev's going to get
    R-E-A-L-L-Y! ANGRY?
    And my last question, in one of your other reviews you mentioned that Sev, Albus, and Harry were the only ones who were going to know about Harry's slavery to Severus, besides Poppy. But what about all of Harry's friends? Is Harry going to tell them or are they going to find out on there own?
    Just wondering.
    Thanks for reading. And again, GREAT JOB ON THIS STORY AS WELL AS POTIONS PROFESSOR. THEY'RE BOTH WICKED GOOD. I recommended them to my sister too. She also likes this stuff.

    Author's Response:

    Hi to you, too, and I'll try to answer your questions.  There may be some spoilers for the story.

    ***Spoiler warning***

     Yes, Harry will tell Severus about the Dursleys eventually.  I'm not sure exactly when yet, but at some point.  Severus will likely find out in bits and pieces rather than everything all at once.

    About the Pensieve...yes, there will come a time when Severus gets really angry with Harry, but not directly related to the Pensieve, though the Pensieve incident does have some influence on him.  But the time when he'll get really angry is more of a misunderstanding between him and Harry.

    Harry's friends will learn about the slavery spell, probably before summer ends, but not for a while.  I think Harry's going to tell them.

    Thanks so much! 

          


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