Potions and Snitches
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Title: Chapter 2 03 Feb 2008 1:17 am
Reviewer: Foolish Wishmaker (Signed) [Report This]
    Very good. I like the way you portray the characters.

    Author's Response: Thank you!
Title: Chapter 1 03 Feb 2008 1:00 am
Reviewer: Foolish Wishmaker (Signed) [Report This]
    Interesting beginning so far... you've hooked me and I'm glad there's already another chapter!

    Author's Response: Thank you!
Title: Chapter 2 03 Feb 2008 12:03 am
Reviewer: teddylonglong (Signed) [Report This]

    Now, that's really unfair - giving us such a great chapter and then you tell us you won't post the next chapter for a while! Moreover, you're the right one to talk about cliffies... ;-)

    *teddy looks for her wand, points it at Kristeh, mumbles 'Imperius - update this story first!'*

    Poor Harry - is he enslaved to Draco or ...?? *biting my fingers off waiting for the next chapter*



    Author's Response: Thank you so much!  I'm sooo happy you like this story...I have to admit I'm in love with it, too, but I am committed to "Potions Professor" and need to work on that one for a bit, too.  You'll find out Harry's fate in chapter 3.  Oh, and I'm resistant to the Imperius curse...I'm very strong-willed, just ask my husband! 
Title: Chapter 2 02 Feb 2008 10:43 pm
Reviewer: Rhea (Signed) [Report This]
    Well, the beginning is really interesting, and I hope you'l post next chapter soon!))))

    Author's Response: Thank you!
Title: Chapter 2 02 Feb 2008 6:25 pm
Reviewer: curlybean (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow! I can't believe you're making us wait for an update. Isn't that a bit harsh? You write such a good chapter, reeling us completely in, then tell us you won't have a new chapter for a while? Definitely cruel and unusual punishment.

    I can't wait for Snape's excursion to the Dursleys. I have a feeling he is in for quite an eye opening experience. He will surely find out that the Dursleys have absolutely no concern for the welfare of their nephew. All of Snape's preconceived ideas about Harry's home life are about to come crashing down around him. I hope he has a sturdy umbrella.

    Anyway, I'm really anxious to find out what exactly Malfoy did to Harry. Sounds a bit ominous. Thanks for the update and I hope to hear from you soon.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you!  I'm sorry, I really am...but I do need to update "Potions Professor" next, and I have a family, and I haven't yet discovered a job that will pay me to write fanfics all day.  If only I could find one of those, I could update much more frequently!  I do really love this story, and I'm already going crazy imagining some lovely mushy, hurt/comfort scenes for later, so I will try to get on with this one asap.  But I love writing "Potions Professor" too!

    You will find out what Draco did to Harry in chapter 3.  I had planned for it to be in ch. 2, but then realised I needed to work out a few more details.  

     

Title: Chapter 2 02 Feb 2008 5:40 pm
Reviewer: MistyMossflower (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great start, I can't wait for what comes next. Keep up the good work. ^_^

    Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Title: Chapter 2 02 Feb 2008 4:48 pm
Reviewer: sunsethill (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, yeah. We're going to save Draco as well as Harry, eh? I enjoyed this chapter and it's little hints for later.

    Author's Response: Thanks!  Yes, I'm thinking that Draco will be redeemed in this fic, but I don't think he'll be a major character for a while still.  I will tell you that he is eventually going to end in Remus and Tonks' custody, won't that be fun!  And I love putting in little hints for later.  Isn't foreshadowing great?
Title: Chapter 2 02 Feb 2008 3:47 pm
Reviewer: Azalea (Signed) [Report This]
    woo loved this chapter kristeh! i dont know which one of your stories i want you to update next! =P hehe

    Author's Response: Thank you, Azalea!  It'll be "Potions Professor" next.
Title: Chapter 2 02 Feb 2008 10:06 am
Reviewer: caro (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Loving it, hope you update soon!!

    Author's Response: Thank you!
Title: Chapter 2 02 Feb 2008 9:09 am
Reviewer: pkrosche (Signed) [Report This]
    "Thank goodness it was almost summer and he would have two blissful months of peace and quiet."
    You really think so, Severus? I don't!! Goody goody!! I was so happy and surprised to see an update! I'll be even more surprised and happy for the next chapter, when you have time for it!

    It was nice to see Severus concerned about Harry's safety...if not just because he's the one hope the wizarding world has against Voldemort. But still, that's likely to change soon, right?

    Interesting history with Draco (and Severus too!) and his parents. That's really sad that it exists that way for him but what can you do...pureblood families these days, sheesh!

    I also just loved how you brought Draco into the interrigation in Dumbledore's office. It was fun watching him attempt to squirm his way out of it, but then self-preservation kicked in! Poor Draco...poor Harry...poor Severus...none of them know what you've got in store...

    Well, like I said, can't wait for the next chapter!! Just update when you can, here or Potions Professor!! Have an enjoyable weekend!

    Author's Response:

    You honestly don't think Severus is going to have quiet, kid-free summer?  Hmm, maybe I'll surprise you.  But that wouldn't be much fun to write, I suppose.

    Oh, yes, Severus will eventually come to care for Harry greatly, but not for a little while yet.  And yeah, poor Draco...I have to make him a little more sympathetic, too.  I don't think I'd want Lucius and Narcissa for parents, would you?

    I'm working on "Potions Professor" tonight, but I'm not sure how much I'll get done.  We'll see.  Thanks again! 

     


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