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Title: Chapter 2 02 Feb 2008 6:51 am
Reviewer: KimSpiritTalks (Signed) [Report This]
    Very good continuation of an excellent story. I loved the comparison between Draco and Harry in Snape's mind. Your premise is original and fun. The Harry slave to Snape's been done before, of course, but I love how you worked it out. And the letter to the Dursley's was a good addition. I can't wait to see how you work out all the details with all the things you've started in this. It's going to be an exciting story. But I do also love HP and the Potions Professor so I'm anxiously awaiting that one, too. I guess I can't have both at once so I'll wait patiently for an update of this one.
    Good story!

    Author's Response:

    Thank you, Kim!  I'm happy you noticed how Severus compared Harry and Draco.  He sympathises with Draco because he knows that Draco has suffered.  He doesn't realise yet that Harry and Draco actually have a great deal in common, at least in that Harry has been abused and neglected, too.  Severus is too blinded by his own prejudices to see that he's been wrong about the kind of person that Harry is.  But I wanted to lay the groundwork for Sev softening up towards Harry once he understands that Harry has suffered, too.

    I'm actually a little nervous about how I'm going to make the plot and sub-plots work out, but I'll just have to try my best.  That's all I can do, right?  The main problem I have with the beginnings of my stories is taking my time to set things up.  I have all these scenes in my mind for later on, wonderful, angsty mushy scenes that I'm dying to write, but I have to make myself slow down and not rush things.

    Anyway, thanks again, and I hope I can get "Potions Professor" updated soon.  

     

Title: Chapter 2 02 Feb 2008 6:14 am
Reviewer: cathyrf (Signed) [Report This]
    This is certainly an interesting turn of events! I loved Albus' dressing down of Draco...I wouldn't want that wizard mad at me. *shudders*

    I'm not getting a good feeling about this spell, and it seems Albus isn't either. Hmmm..

    I'll definitely be looking forward to the next chapter!

    Author's Response: Thank you!  No, I wouldn't want to get on Dumbledore's bad side, either.  He's quite a formidable opponent.  The spell is kind of a two-edged sword, I suppose.  It takes a great deal away from Harry, for a time it will seem to destroy his life, in his opinion.  But in the end, it will give him his greatest desire, too.  
Title: Chapter 1 30 Jan 2008 9:48 pm
Reviewer: cathyrf (Signed) [Report This]
    Well, you've begun a new story and ended the first chapter on quite the cliffhanger. What the heck did that smarmy Slytherin do anyway?

    I felt so sorry for Harry and understood completely why he didn't want to join his friends.

    It's an interesting opening and I eagerly look forward to the next chapter!

    Author's Response: Thank you!  You'll find out what Draco did in chapter 2, which I hope will be up in a day or two, and then I can work on "Potions Professor" this weekend.  I'm glad you understand what Harry's going through right now, and unfortunately for him, things are about to get even worse.
Title: Chapter 1 30 Jan 2008 1:50 am
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    please please write chapters soon

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I'm working on it!
Title: Chapter 1 30 Jan 2008 1:17 am
Reviewer: Pan (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Looks good so far.

    Author's Response: Thank you!
Title: Chapter 1 28 Jan 2008 7:04 pm
Reviewer: Elise_Malfoy (Signed) [Report This]
    OOOH! Cliffie!
    Oh, please do update soon! This story is cool!
    I can't wait to find out what curse Draco cast!
    EEEP!
    -Elise

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I'm really happy you like it!  I'm working on the next chapter! 
Title: Chapter 1 28 Jan 2008 1:56 pm
Reviewer: MinervaM (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Really good stuff! Can't wait for the next chapter...

    Author's Response: Thank you very much!
Title: Chapter 1 28 Jan 2008 12:39 pm
Reviewer: Wolverine (Signed) [Report This]
    Great story. I can't wait for the next chapter.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I'm going to try to get the next chapter up by the end of the week! 
Title: Chapter 1 28 Jan 2008 3:40 am
Reviewer: Kristi Parrish (Signed) [Report This]
    Good! I like it keep it up

    Author's Response: Thank you!
Title: Chapter 1 27 Jan 2008 10:48 pm
Reviewer: celestialuna (Signed) [Report This]
    Good start.

    Author's Response: Thank you!

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