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Title: Chapter 45 22 Apr 2012 8:13 am
Reviewer: DreamLuna (Signed) [Report This]
    Another reason for snape to feel guilty. How annoying when Harry did something bad and this is just going to lead to an early forgiveness and take the attention off of his disobedience.
Title: Chapter 44 22 Apr 2012 8:00 am
Reviewer: DreamLuna (Signed) [Report This]
    For a minute there, I thought Harry would be mature and walk away. I hate that Harry just set himself up for this and that he doesn't realize how big of a deal this all is.
Title: Chapter 43 22 Apr 2012 7:46 am
Reviewer: DreamLuna (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm surprised Harry didn't get into any trouble for trying to hurt Malfoy and start a fight. Ugh, I can't believe Harry said those things . . .
Title: Chapter 42 22 Apr 2012 7:36 am
Reviewer: DreamLuna (Signed) [Report This]
    That's annoying how Harry rushed into that and now Severus will be disappointed in him.
Title: Chapter 41 22 Apr 2012 7:27 am
Reviewer: DreamLuna (Signed) [Report This]
    Darn, no real confrontation with Draco. I wish I knew more about what was going on with him though.
Title: Chapter 40 22 Apr 2012 7:12 am
Reviewer: DreamLuna (Signed) [Report This]
    Ugh, I hate when Harry thinks he knows better than Severus and basically wants to reprimand him. I also don't like how Severus extended his praise to Hermione and Ron but not the rest, it should be everyone praised or everyone (except Harry) ridiculed. But overall, great chapter. I want another Draco confrontation-cross my fingers as I press next.
Title: Chapter 39 22 Apr 2012 7:03 am
Reviewer: DreamLuna (Signed) [Report This]
    I knew it-the Draco thing. I still wonder if Draco will become nicer when he finds out it was a slavery spell or whether he will mock Harry. Of course I'm just guessing that he'll find out but that's just where my mind goes.
Title: Chapter 38 22 Apr 2012 6:51 am
Reviewer: DreamLuna (Signed) [Report This]
    Will they have a run in with Draco? I bet they do. I wish your chapters had names because that would make me less nervous for Harry if I knew what was coming (as long as they're not completely ambiguous).
Title: Chapter 37 22 Apr 2012 6:39 am
Reviewer: DreamLuna (Signed) [Report This]
    Strange how Severus wants Harry to make nice with Slytherins and then warns him against them at the same time.
Title: Chapter 36 22 Apr 2012 6:30 am
Reviewer: DreamLuna (Signed) [Report This]
    So Draco is miserable because Harry has taken Severus away from him? I wonder what his punishment is and whether your Draco will be nicer to Harry.

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