This chapter was great although I can't help wishing the spell would end soon.
I bet Harry gets hurt or maybe Severus arrives early or something. For a minute there I supposed that Harry would accidentally ruin the adoption papers and wouldn't that cause quite an emotional mess when Severus got back.
I thought the scene where Harry made his wishes was really moving. This story really is great but I hope that the spell is lifted soon and that Snape then has a misunderstanding about Harry still wanting to be his adopted son.
Oh, the scene with Albus was so sweet on Severus' part and so was the scene with Harry. They're really coming to care/understand eachother or at least they're trying. Although Harry is deffinitely less for it than Snape.
You're my child now . . . awwwww. Your Severus is great so far. I wonder when he'll find out about Harry's wish to die.
It's so awful how Harry keeps thinking about his death in such an optimistic way. I wonder how that will play out . . .
Is draco going to end up living with them? I can't tell. I hope Harry starts to trust Snape to be a good person. I bet Harry asks to see his friends for his birthday. Anyway thanks for writing such a magnificent story
Wouldn't the book fly into Snapes hand and then he would give it to Harry? I'm unsure about the elves as they are slightly mean to Snape but I am glad that you have not yet given Snape a wife or children as they would get in the way-at first- of the Snape-Harry relationship and it would widely change your Snape's behavior. But I love the way Snape has reformed so much already and I hope Harry will grow to trust him soon.
Wow. I wonder how this snape will handle the dursleys since he's so sympathetic to draco.
I am so very sorry about not reviewing for such a long time, but I have recently awakened an extreme obsession with Legolas Thranduilion. I looovvvveeeee him! Well, great new chapters, sorry about not reviewing, and Namarie!
Lle mellon,
Laer(summer)
P.S.
I am currently learning Sindarin.
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