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Title: Chapter 5 23 Feb 2022 9:29 pm
Reviewer: MeAndNotYou1001 (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm going to have a meltdown for Harry.
    My music is on suffle and "Invisible" by Hunter Hayes started playing about halfway through the chapter and now I'm half a step from tears.
Title: Chapter 4 23 Feb 2022 9:19 pm
Reviewer: MeAndNotYou1001 (Signed) [Report This]
    OMFGoodness!
    I am a normal, relatively undamaged person and this would have me flipping out. Harry, as a boy who feels like he's never been in control in his life and having been subjected to the Dursleys as their house-elf, is going to have a meltdown. I can sense it.
Title: Chapter 79 29 May 2020 11:29 pm
Reviewer: HijabiSlytherin (Signed) [Report This]
    Hello, I've been reading this story for 2 days now. I just want to say that it's amazing. Everything about it. The way you portrayed the all of the characters, the rollercoaster like plot, the way you writing g has made us laugh and cry and wait in anticipation for updates...We really love this story. So, I'm going to ask you if you can continue this story. PLEASE, we have bee n waiting for so long. Either way, I just want you to know that you have our support. Hundreds of people are here to cheer you on while your writing. Even if you don't continue the story, you have our support. You probably won't see this review, but know that when you update, hundreds of people will come back to your story. Thank you, and kudos to the author for all of the hard work they have put into this brilliant story.
Title: Chapter 21 28 May 2020 5:28 pm
Reviewer: HijabiSlytherin (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm reading this during quarantine, and I just want to say how perfect this story is. I hate to admit it, but I'm sobbing just like Sev here.
Title: Chapter 8 21 Oct 2017 3:33 pm
Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed) [Report This]
    You know, biting on your lips to ease the pain in another part does help. I have tried it. I do it every month........
Title: Chapter 79 21 Oct 2017 2:45 pm
Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed) [Report This]
    Get Harry kidnapped and tortured by Dolohov and Greyback. In front of Severus.
    Angst!!!! Muahahahahahahahah!
    I love angst, and what better then torturing Harry in front of Severus? Try not to torture Sev, I don't like that, emotional torture suits Sev better. Please?
    This is awesome, have any idea when will you update?
    Will you take my idea? I would love it if you do, but your wish. I just want you to update.
Title: Chapter 77 21 Oct 2017 7:09 am
Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed) [Report This]
    Gosh, if anything bad happens now, I swear I am going to stop reading then and there. (No, I am not.)
Title: Chapter 76 21 Oct 2017 7:04 am
Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed) [Report This]
    The slavery spell had vanished!!! Yey!!!! I guess that love between a slave and master dissolved it?
Title: Chapter 75 21 Oct 2017 6:30 am
Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh no, I am on chapter 75, the story has 79 chapters at the moment. Gosh, I just have 4 chapters left, that is so depressing.
Title: Chapter 74 21 Oct 2017 6:17 am
Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed) [Report This]
    Told you that something was going to go wrong. Nothing is ever right for Harry, something always spoils the fun.

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