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Title: Chapter 76 29 Jun 2011 6:58 am
Reviewer: alifromnm (Signed) [Report This]
    Another wonderful chapter. You just can't resist a "cliffee" can you? LOL No slavery spell showing......interesting, love cures all things! It was nice that and sad when Harry realized that the adoption could have happened anytime in those past months with only Dumbledor with them to do the bonding......as humans we learn by our mistakes!!!! Thank you for a great chapter!

    Author's Response: Thanks, Ali.  Of course I can't resist a cliffhanger; it keeps things interesting, doesn't it?  Yeah, Dumbledore could have done the ceremony all along, but I had to have a reason to prolong the situation so I had to have them just not think about that.  Rather a weak point, but it was the best I could come up with.
Title: Chapter 76 29 Jun 2011 5:44 am
Reviewer: twilight1987 (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw! Is the spell gone? Great chapter....

    Author's Response:

    Thank you! 

    >>>Is the spell gone?

    Tune in next time, lol. 

     

     

Title: Chapter 76 29 Jun 2011 5:41 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Squeeeee!!!!! Yay! Harry is finally going to be what he was all along...Severus' son.

    I'm glad that Draco is getting along with Hermione and Draco and that they plan on continuing to do so after they start back at Hogwarts.

    Ooh, very curious. You left us with a cliffie my dear! I can't wait to see the implications of this adoption ceremony.

    Great job as usual Kristeh. I can't wait for more!

    Author's Response: Thanks!  It'll be interesting to see Draco being friends with Harry and Co. at school, won't it?  And the adoption ceremony...you knew something was going to happen there!   
Title: Chapter 76 29 Jun 2011 4:43 am
Reviewer: nightowllor (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter! But...did you HAVE to end it there? :) Anyway, curious to see where the next chapter goes! Keep up the great work.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Yeah, a mean cliffie, isn't it? 
Title: Chapter 75 11 Jun 2011 10:37 am
Reviewer: humanoidmegg (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Very enjoyable read! It was great to watch Harry and Snape slowly grow closer and the addition of Draco to the mix added extra interest.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I'm glad you're enjoying the story!
Title: Chapter 75 31 May 2011 7:43 am
Reviewer: Mercia Dragonslayer (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Very, very good. Brilliant, in fact! I love Severus and Harry.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I love writing Severus and Harry too.
Title: Chapter 75 28 May 2011 10:05 pm
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    So glad they are both ok!! too cute at the end there with Sev and Harry :D

    Author's Response: Aw, thanks!  I'm glad you liked it.
Title: Chapter 75 28 May 2011 6:56 am
Reviewer: Robert Sharp (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Just so you know, I visit this site almost daily to get an update regarding Slave Child. This is the only story that I keep up with. If you happen to know of another story that is just as good as yours, please let me know. I thought you had quit on writing the story because of the long pauses between chapters, I am glad that you are back to continue the story for us Harry Potter fans. My new email address is resharp710@gmail.com. How do you become a beta? Please let me know, cause I would love to become one. Thanks and peace, Robb Sharp

    Author's Response: Thank you so much!  I've sent you a PM.
Title: Chapter 75 25 May 2011 11:55 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Good bit of angst here and the grieving needed to be out in the open thank you for a great chapter

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Yeah, I thought it was time Harry dealt with his grief over Sirius. 
Title: Chapter 75 25 May 2011 5:57 pm
Reviewer: NickyD (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter! Well worth waiting for...
    Thanks for the update.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I'm happy you enjoyed it.

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