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Title: Chapter 74 09 Mar 2011 12:54 am
Reviewer: mithrilandtj (Signed) [Report This]
    There's nothing posted for chapter 75

    Author's Response: It's taken care of now, thanks!
Title: Chapter 74 08 Mar 2011 10:43 pm
Reviewer: Baghi (Signed) [Report This]
    Loved the chapter, but for some reason it's been posted twice. Kudos on awell written chapter, and arrgh on the cliffie.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Yeah, I realized that it had been posted twice, but thankfully either Pandora or OE took care of it (Thanks, Pandora and/or OE).
Title: Chapter 74 08 Mar 2011 7:15 pm
Reviewer: shadowienne (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oh, NO! A CLIFFIE! Well, I loved the chapter anyway-- so glad Harry got out and about, and especially that people were treating him decently. Just out of curiosity, could Harry's Portkey bracelet ever "wear out"? Like if he's been larking about one time too many, and suddenly NEEDS to escape a dangerous situation, and the Portkey runs out of "GO" power at a critical moment... (I was really surprised to see the bracelet being used for casual multi-person transportation, is why I'm asking.)

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Well, yeah, I did say that I've taken some liberties with the portkey.  I think in canon they can only be used once, and Harry's can be used over and over.  No, I don't think it would 'wear out'.  I really have no idea how they work, but for my purposes, they can be used more than once, though they would need to be activated each time.
Title: Chapter 74 08 Mar 2011 4:28 pm
Reviewer: p_stotts (Signed) [Report This]
    Dang it all! You just had to leave it there, didn't you? You'd better post soon... or else! *grin* Great chapter. Greater cliffhanger. Can't wait for more.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Well, we authors have to do something to keep readers coming back, now don't we?
Title: Chapter 74 08 Mar 2011 3:37 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh my God. My heart is in my throat.

    What the heck happened at Hermione's house? Oh poor Hermione. I hope that her parent's are alright.

    That was wonderful Kristeh. I especially loved the Quidditch game, and how you described the excitement of the match so well. And I think that you did a wonderful job describing Boscastle (I've never been there either) and the museum.

    Great job as usual. Oh, and I loved the Christmas presents too.

    Wow! Chapter 74 already. I want this story to go on forever! LOL!

    At least update quickly please, after that cliffie!!! (Young lady!)

    Wonderful chapter Kristeh, and I simply can't wait for the next one.

    Author's Response:

    Hey, thanks, Pandora!  What happened at Hermione's house?  Well, nothing good, that's for sure!  Are her parents all right?  I'll be evil and say that you'll just have to keep reading to find out...*evil chortle*

    Glad you liked the Quidditch game.  As you know, I always struggle with the action scenes so I really appreciate the reassurances.  It was fun writing about Boscastle (it sounds like a fascinating place).  I hope I didn't botch it up.

    Well, I'll keep writing as long as I can think of ideas and people want me to, lol.

    I'm looking forward to more from you...hint, hint! 

     

     

     

Title: Chapter 40 14 Feb 2011 5:31 pm
Reviewer: Jessica (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I see that conversation going better than Harry expects.

    Author's Response: Thank you for all the reviews!  I'm sorry it's taken a while for me to reply...I've been having some computer issues again.  But I'm really happy you're enjoying the story!
Title: Chapter 39 14 Feb 2011 4:57 pm
Reviewer: Jessica (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I wish I could have gotten detentions like that lol

    Author's Response: Yes, more fun than the usual Snape detentions definitely!
Title: Chapter 38 14 Feb 2011 4:41 pm
Reviewer: Jessica (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Yay flying time!
Title: Chapter 37 14 Feb 2011 4:32 pm
Reviewer: Jessica (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I hope that the Gryffindors start getting along with Severus. It was nice to see Harry take the iniciative with the younger Slytherins too.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Yeah, it's good to see them all making some progress in getting along.
Title: Chapter 36 14 Feb 2011 4:27 pm
Reviewer: Jessica (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oh, now I'm really excited to see what's up with Draco.

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