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Title: Chapter 14 19 Jan 2011 6:35 pm
Reviewer: NickyD (Signed) [Report This]
    Another great chapter! I like the fact that Severus is slowly warming up to Harry, how he is starting to figure out that Harry is not his father after all. Excellent work! Thanks!

    Author's Response: Oh, thank you again!  Yeah, it took a lot to open Severus' eyes to the real Harry, but he's realizing how wrong he was now.  Glad you're enjoying the story. 
Title: Chapter 5 18 Jan 2011 9:24 pm
Reviewer: NickyD (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor Harry, I'm sure he wishes he could wake up from what must be his worst nightmare. Snape, in his "I hate Potter" glory can be downright scary. I hope Norie is right and Sev will warm up to Harry soon. Great chapter!!

    Author's Response: Yes, this is Harry's worst nightmare right now, but things will end up getting better for him.
Title: Chapter 3 18 Jan 2011 9:06 pm
Reviewer: NickyD (Signed) [Report This]
    GREAT WORK!! I like the background information on Severus and I love Norie and Zan, they're hilarious trying to meddle in Sev' life and get him married. I'm liking this story more and more.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  It's fun to try to come up with backstories for the characters, and I have to admit to having a soft spot for Norie and Zan, too.
Title: Chapter 1 18 Jan 2011 7:39 pm
Reviewer: NickyD (Signed) [Report This]
    Great start! It's only normal that Sirius' death affected Harry and I felt so sorry for him. I hope that Severus lurking means he was watching out for Harry. What did that prat of a Slytherin do now? I guess I'll find out in the next chapter or so. I was only suppose to read 1 chapter on my lunch break, but I can't stop now. This is a great read, thanks!

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I always thought that Harry would have been more affected by Sirius' death than he seemed in canon.  Hope you don't get in trouble in work, lol!
Title: Chapter 72 12 Jan 2011 11:01 pm
Reviewer: Eva (Anonymous) [Report This]
    this is so good! I can't wait for it to continue... But I guess I have to :(

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I'm glad you're enjoying it!
Title: Chapter 72 06 Jan 2011 3:28 pm
Reviewer: Dream Painter (Signed) [Report This]
    Christmas in the summer is the newest trend, y'know. lol

    Another nice chapter. I liked the moments between Harry and Draco, and Harry and Ron. Well done. ^^

    Author's Response: LOL!  I hope I can get Christmas written before summer!  Thank you, I'm glad you liked it!
Title: Chapter 71 06 Jan 2011 3:08 pm
Reviewer: Dream Painter (Signed) [Report This]
    *applauds*

    Ah, I loved this! Well writ, indeed. Love how everyone knew it was Harry and encouraged him to stay. The whole thing was just... *happy sigh*

    Now, I must read the next chapter. ^^
Title: Chapter 72 04 Jan 2011 11:10 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh no I really thought we'd have Christmas this time! Never mind it was a great chapter but you should know that the British Museum is free only special exhibitions held there charge so Harry's present was not an expensive one but a good choice.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I really thought we'd get to Christmas too, actually.  Yes, after I wrote the chapter I was reading about the museum and saw that admission is generally free (I'd read about it before writing the chapter, too, but obviously didn't read enough).  But I still thought it would be a good gift for Draco, as he and Remus are interested in art and it would be a fun activity that Draco could share with his new family.
Title: Chapter 72 04 Jan 2011 5:23 am
Reviewer: EllaEleniel (Signed) [Report This]
    Yay, a good happy chapter! Last chapter felt like a turning point, and I think now Harry will be happier and in a better place mentally. For a while, Harry was getting quite self-conscious, though I can totally understand why, but I like this happy Harry better.

    With that said, I love Christmas chapters. They always feel more whimsical than real Christmases. Even if it takes until summer, I'll still be anxious to read it. I hope Harry gets lots of fun surprises. I'm anxious to see what Severus got for Harry and vice versa.

    PS: Congrats on reaching 1,000 reviews on this site!

    Author's Response:

    Thank you, Ella!  Yeah, I think Harry has reached a turning point, too.  He knows now for certain that most people are on his side and won't look down on him because of the spell, and that is a comfort to him.  I love the Christmas chapters too, and hopefully it won't take me til summer, lol.

     

Title: Chapter 72 03 Jan 2011 10:55 pm
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    Woohoo for updates :D

    Author's Response: Thank you!

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