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Title: Chapter 73 21 Oct 2017 5:55 am
Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed) [Report This]
    I am having a feeling that it is the calm before the storm. Something is going to happen. Noting is ever right for Harry for long.
Title: Chapter 71 21 Oct 2017 5:25 am
Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed) [Report This]
    The moment Draco asked to dance with Luna, I was pretty sure something is going to go wrong. When has it ever not one wrong?
    ha! At least it wasn't a big deal, well, that punch was quite good, I would have liked to use a few stinging hexes too.
Title: Chapter 70 20 Oct 2017 6:20 pm
Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed) [Report This]
    Hmm, I am with Draco and Severus in this one,but I can totally relate to Harry. I had an illness once in my Sixth class and I was on a month long leave, I did not like all the attention everyone gave me when I resumed school.
Title: Chapter 69 20 Oct 2017 5:51 pm
Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed) [Report This]
    Well, that was nice. I liked it, so sweet of Draco to apologise, I was pretty sure he would go to a guilt trip the moment he had looked sharply at Dumbledore at the mention of Severus and Harry not going back to Hogwarts.
Title: Chapter 67 20 Oct 2017 5:17 pm
Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed) [Report This]
    Well, I understood Draco the Prat, but I was pleasantly surprised by Draco's pleading tone.
Title: Chapter 66 20 Oct 2017 5:11 pm
Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed) [Report This]
    Tut Tut, Harry, you are making a mistake there.
Title: Chapter 64 20 Oct 2017 4:56 pm
Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed) [Report This]
    Well, he also is the git who just lost his mother in front of him after being tortured himself and seeing his mum get tortured. He is also the git who got rebuffed every time he went to Severus for help. He is also the git who was hurting.
    Well, when Harry was hurting, even he did say some and do some hurtful things to Severus, it's just that the magnitude of Harry's was very less compared to Draco's mistakes.
    I just didn't defend Draco. Who says I defended Draco? Err, I mean Malfoy?
    No, I didn't, anyone who says so will be strangled by me after I have strangled Drac- I mean Malfoy.
Title: Chapter 63 20 Oct 2017 4:18 pm
Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed) [Report This]
    Prejudices, prejudices. Well, but at least he isn't showing scorn, instead he is just showing abject terror, which is almost rational compared to what Greyback did and he was a werewolf.
Title: Chapter 59 20 Oct 2017 8:48 am
Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed) [Report This]
    Harry acts a little like a whiny idiot, but I guess it is normal for him to feel threatened. I dunno though, I never felt threatened with my brother, or maybe I did, cause I am almost always trying to make him look bad................
Title: Chapter 58 20 Oct 2017 8:34 am
Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed) [Report This]
    I am guessing that the confrontation is going to get a tad bit nasty.

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