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Title: Chapter 71 20 Nov 2010 5:47 am
Reviewer: Robert Sharp (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wow, it just keeps getting better and better!!! It's great that there are forums such as this one, for those of us who are sad that there may not be a new harry potter book or movie. You bring justice to the Harry Potter univers, and I cannot wait for the next chapter. Thank you!!!!!!

    Author's Response: Thank you so much!  I hope you're enjoying the forums...lots of wonderful stories here.  I know that I've been a little sad about the last movies coming out, but as long as we fans are still here to write and discuss the characters, I hope the fandom will still have a long life!
Title: Chapter 71 19 Nov 2010 7:55 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    OmG!! Kristeh!

    Squee, squeeeeeeeee!!!! I loved it! Especially the end. Yay for Harry's friends. I just knew that they'd come through, and I'm so glad that Draco got a chance to prove that he had really changed, by defending Harry like that.

    Aw, poor Luna though. I'm sad that her necklace broke, and I hope that Draco can really get it fixed for her.

    It was too cute that the Gryffies, and the other Houses, all stood by Harry, and that Seamus and Neville all knew that Harry was not really Barney Weasley

    Oh, that was really funny too, when those bullies whined that Draco had broken their noses, and hurt them, and Dumbles, and Sev went along with Draco's story about them slipping on the Polyjuice potion. Serves him right, the bully.

    I really love this story; it just keeps getting better and better. I can't wait for more.

    Great job as usual, Kristeh.

    Author's Response: Thank you, Pandora!  Glad you liked it.  You know that bit with Draco defending Harry has been planned for ages, so it was fun to finally get to write it out.  Don't worry, I think Luna's necklace can be repaired.  Of course all of Harry's friends stood up for him, we all knew they would.  Yeah, I don't think anyone was feeling much sympathy for Bole and Bletchley.  I sure wouldn't want to be in their shoes!  Thanks again!
Title: Chapter 71 19 Nov 2010 5:58 pm
Reviewer: snapefan_17 (Signed) [Report This]
    great so far really well written with an excellent plot. :)

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I really appreciate it.
Title: Chapter 71 19 Nov 2010 3:35 pm
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh im so glad they are going back to Hogwarts!! ive missed the general daily grinds of them being students hehe :)

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I've missed having them at Hogwarts, and yet I'm a little nervous about them returning, lol...I'm more comfortable writing them at Prince Hall.  But Hogwarts is  just an integral part of Harry's story and it's good to push yourself out of your comfort zone sometimes. 
Title: Chapter 71 19 Nov 2010 1:34 pm
Reviewer: shan (Anonymous) [Report This]
    awesome!

    Author's Response: Thank you!
Title: Chapter 71 19 Nov 2010 8:41 am
Reviewer: DS (Anonymous) [Report This]
    That was awesome! I loved the whole chapter!

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I'm so happy you enjoyed it.
Title: Chapter 71 19 Nov 2010 5:19 am
Reviewer: EllaEleniel (Signed) [Report This]
    Yay, good for Harry! It's great he's ready to return to Hogwarts. It's a huge step for him to take and one he needs to take. With Harry and Severus at Hogwarts full time I hope there'll be some progress soon on the slavery spell.

    Perhaps part of Draco's new role could be helping with it. He might not know enough to figure something out but he could say something which sparks a thought in Severus or Albus. Great chapter.

    Author's Response: Thank you, Ella!  Yeah, Harry did need to return and coming to the Yule Ball was the necessary step that helped him to realize it.  And yes, Draco still has a role to play.
Title: Chapter 71 19 Nov 2010 5:01 am
Reviewer: DazzlingD (Signed) [Report This]
    loved it!

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I'm  happy you liked it.
Title: Chapter 71 19 Nov 2010 4:21 am
Reviewer: cara-tanaka (Signed) [Report This]
    Awesome chapter. Update soon :)

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Glad you liked it.
Title: Chapter 71 19 Nov 2010 4:17 am
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed) [Report This]
    Yeah! 1st step to returning. (even if it took a couple of jerks to pave the way!)

    Thanks for the update!
    V,.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Yeah, those bullies were the catalyst that made Harry see that his friends would be there for him.

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