Potions and Snitches
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Title: Chapter 70 17 Oct 2010 6:52 am
Reviewer: Lizzete (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Congratulations!!

    This is by far my favourite story ^^

    It has all the ingredientes I love in a fic: Severus as Harry's father, redeemed Draco, good Slytherins ^^

    You are an amazingly talented writer!

    Please, update soon :)

    Author's Response: Aw, thank you!  I'm so happy that you're enjoying it and I like those elements a lot too, along with loyal Ron and Hermione.  I'll begin the Yule Ball chapter this weekend, but as I'm sick with a cold, I don't know how far along I'll get.
Title: Chapter 70 17 Oct 2010 2:56 am
Reviewer: Dream Painter (Signed) [Report This]
    And another snippet of the tale, at last! I loved how Harry asked Draco a bit about art and how he's trying to get his friends to know each other a little better.

    Nicely done, Kristeh. ^^

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Yeah, Harry's all about his friends.
Title: Chapter 70 17 Oct 2010 1:19 am
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Loved the photo session can't wait to read about the ball

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Glad you liked it; I enjoyed that little part too.
Title: Chapter 70 16 Oct 2010 2:19 pm
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    Oooh almost to the ball!! :)

    Author's Response: Almost!  Thank you!
Title: Chapter 70 15 Oct 2010 10:44 pm
Reviewer: Mountain-Rose (Anonymous) [Report This]
    very good story, with nice progression and believability.

    looking forwards to the next instalment.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I'm glad you're enjoying it!
Title: Chapter 70 14 Oct 2010 7:25 am
Reviewer: EllaEleniel (Signed) [Report This]
    This was a great chapter, Kristeh. I love that Harry continues to include Draco. It shows how far Harry is coming with forgiveness and also just growing up. He's realized that while he could hate Draco forever, it won't change anything.

    Attending the Yule Ball is a step forward for Harry even with the use of polyjuice. I hope it'll boost his confidence and make him realize he doesn't have to hide away.

    The early Christmas gift of a camera was also a great idea. It's just another example of something Harry was robbed of during his childhood. I can see him taking pictures of everything for a while, just like a little kid.

    I'm anxious to see how the Yule Ball goes for Harry. I hope it's a happy experience.

    PS: I loved the bit where Draco was worrying about his appearance. He's been subdued lately, and it's a good reminder that even through the changes Draco hasn't completely morphed into an entirely different person with a completely different personality.

    Author's Response: Thank you, Ella!  Just attending the Yule Ball is a big step for Harry, and of course I have plans for it.  I can see Harry snapping photos like crazy too, at least for a while.  And glad you like Draco...yeah, some things never change, lol.
Title: Chapter 70 14 Oct 2010 5:45 am
Reviewer: robert sharp (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I found part of this story on the fan fiction site on theforce.net non starwars fan fiction. and i could not stop reading, it took me a while to find this website,and i'm glad i did, this story is wonderful, it makes me wish it was canon for the Harry Potter series, keep up the good work, an i can't wait for the next chapter. resharp710@hotmail.com

    Author's Response: Thank you and welcome to Potions and Snitches!  There are many wonderful stories here; I hope you'll enjoy them all.
Title: Chapter 70 14 Oct 2010 5:20 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Ooh, I loved it Kristeh!

    I especially loved the teasing between Harry and Ginny about her kissing him under the misletoe. LOL!

    Aw, that's so nice of Harry to include Draco, and to want so desperately for all of his friends to get along.

    I really hope that Harry eventually can feel that he doesn't need Polyjuice to return to Hogwarts. I want so much for him to be free again. If only Severus and Dumbledore can find a way to reverse the Slavery spell.

    I'm so looking forward to the next chappie Kristeh. Wonderful job as usual. :)

    Author's Response: Thank you, Pandora!  I'm so happy you enjoyed it!
Title: Chapter 70 14 Oct 2010 5:03 am
Reviewer: hpfan4life (Signed) [Report This]
    Yay! Another Chapter! So exciting...and hopefully the rest of the gang will try to get along with Draco. I know the boy is trying...and that's all you can really ask of him...right?

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Yep, Draco's doing all he can at the moment...he's certainly not perfect, but he's trying.
Title: Chapter 70 14 Oct 2010 5:01 am
Reviewer: hpfan4life (Signed) [Report This]
    Yay! Another Chapter! So exciting...and hopefully the rest of the gang will try to get along with Draco. I know the boy is trying...and that's all you can really ask of him...right?

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Yes, Draci still has a ways to go, but he is trying.

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