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Title: Chapter 69 21 Sep 2010 7:29 am
Reviewer: Dream Painter (Signed) [Report This]
    Wonderful update, Kristeh! I want Harry to show up as himself, too. Loved the little scene between the two boys, and the Christmas decorating. Well done!

    Author's Response: Thank you, DP!  Glad you liked it.  Draco and Harry are really starting to be fun for me to write so I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Title: Chapter 69 21 Sep 2010 5:50 am
Reviewer: DazzlingD (Signed) [Report This]
    loved the chapter. i think if the caster, Draco, did a finite toward Harry, the spell would end. they just don't know it has to be the caster who sets the slave free.
    I am waiting and reading to see if I am correct. I love this story.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I'm happy you're enjoying it.  The solution to the spell...well, we'll just have to wait and see.  I hope the solution will be pleasing to everyone.
Title: Chapter 68 12 Sep 2010 7:46 am
Reviewer: Baghi (Signed) [Report This]
    I love this story, I always have. I just wanted the chapters to build up before I started reading again. I have two questions: Will Harry be released, and how deep a relationship will he and Draco have? Kudos on several well written chapters.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Well, I don't want to answer you here, for spoiler reasons.  If you really want to know the answers to your questions, let me know and I'll send you a PM.
Title: Chapter 68 05 Sep 2010 7:17 am
Reviewer: KimSpiritTalks (Signed) [Report This]
    I really love how Snape and Harry can talk and Harry is able to bring his concerns about the slavery spell to Snape without fear of being ridiculed. And how he can tease Snape, and report fears for his friend, all without fear of being belittled or rejected. It's a lovely family scene you paint and so satisfying to look in on. I can't wait to see how the Yule Ball plays out. Great chapter!

    Author's Response: Thank you, Kim!  Yeah, Harry and Severus are very close by now and I love writing their scenes, too, so I'm really happy you enjoy them.  I'm excited about the Yule Ball too.
Title: Chapter 68 26 Aug 2010 1:01 am
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter I wondered when this issue would come out in the open very sensitive handling of it. Who will he take? I hope not Ginny

    Author's Response: Thank you!  To be honest, I haven't decided for sure who Harry will take, precisely  because I know some fans have strong feelings about ships.  Personally, I don't.  I can enjoy Harry with almost anyone, if it's well-written, but that also may be because I'm just not a strong romance fan and so I don't have strong feelings about any ship.  We'll see...
Title: Chapter 68 24 Aug 2010 7:04 pm
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww how sweet :)

    Author's Response: Thank you!
Title: Chapter 68 24 Aug 2010 12:52 pm
Reviewer: UltramarineQuest (Signed) [Report This]
    Goody! So it's been updated! FINALLY!
    Gr8.........wish u write more soon...

    Author's Response: Thank you!
Title: Chapter 68 24 Aug 2010 8:14 am
Reviewer: Dream Painter (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw..! Cute chapter. Shorter than I should have liked, but I don't any of your chapter would be "long enough". ^^ Just kidding. Well... mostly.

    As always, nicely done - looking forward to what happens next.

    Author's Response: Aw, thank you!  I'm really enjoying your story too.
Title: Chapter 68 24 Aug 2010 8:02 am
Reviewer: DS (Anonymous) [Report This]
    A sweet chapter, but I am wondering if you have plans for bringing Harry and Severus back to Hogwarts and lifting the spell? Though of course going to the ball seems like a step towards it, but I really hope to see some more development in the story!

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Well, the emotional development of the characters has always been a main emphasis of the story, so I think the growing friendship between Harry and Draco has been important.  It's been crucial to have them be alone at Prince Hall in these early stages, as I think it would have been harder for that to come about at Hogwarts, if they were surrounded by others.  Going back to the ball is also a crucial part of the story.  As for the slavery spell, it will be resolved in time.  
Title: Chapter 68 24 Aug 2010 5:29 am
Reviewer: EllaEleniel (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter, Kristeh! Over the last few chapters you've had Harry's feelings over the slavery spell as a main plot point that I can't help but wonder where that's leading to. At least I think it's leading to somewhere not just Harry continuing to express his insecurities.

    I'm so glad Harry will get to go to the Yule Ball and spend some time our in the "real world." He needs to break his isolation and not forget that there's a wonderful world out there full of wonderful people (and girls like Severus said) that's waiting for Harry to experience and explore. He may currently technically be a slave (I still believe there'll find some way to free him soon) but he's really only a slave if he allows himself to feel like one, especially in Severus' eyes.

    I loved the fluffiness at the end. It shows just how far Harry and Sev have come in their relationship and how comfortable Harry is feeling with having Sev as his father.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you, Ella!  Well, the slavery spell is always an underlying issue through the story.  Sometimes it's more in the spotlight than at other times, but it is always in the background.  Things will be resolved at some point, but not just yet.

    Yes, Harry really does need to get back out into the world, and if using polyjuice potion is what  he needs to take the first steps, then Severus is willing to help him out there.  And yes, Severus never regards Harry as a slave and he doesn't want Harry to see himself that way either, but he does recognize that it's difficult for him.

    And yeah, they've come a long way, haven't they?

    Looking forward to another chapter for you! 


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