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Title: Chapter 68 24 Aug 2010 3:19 am
Reviewer: JolisGSD (Signed) [Report This]
    Nice chapter!!!! Even though it was dealing with Harry's fears about the slavery spell, Snape's conversation with him made it a warm, fluffy, delightful read.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Yes, Harry still struggles with the spell, more so at times than at others, but Severus is there to  help and comfort him.
Title: Chapter 68 24 Aug 2010 2:43 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh Kristen, how beautifully you captured all of Harry's insecurities and fears, but his wonderful selflessness as well.Oh, and I can "feel" the bond between Harry and Severus, and am so glad that they have each other now. Although it's a shame that it took such an awful spell to bring these two together, I truly think that both of their lives are richer now, since they have each other.

    Aw, poor Harry. I never imagined that he'd think so far ahead to what would happen if he married and had chilren, but I suppose that it's normal.

    I wish so much that Dumbles would find a way to reverse the spell, and then Harry and Severus could truly be free to be a normal father and son.

    I wonder if Harry "does" attend the ball with the Polyjuice, if he'll eventually feel brave enough to show his real face, and accept that so many people support him.

    I'm glad that you're mum and dad are settling in their new place nicely Kristeh, and I can't wait for the next chapter, and the "Ball". I'm very curious as to who Harry will become.

    Will Severus attend as a chaperone? I know that he dearly misses stalking the halls, and handing out detentions. LOL! :)

    Author's Response:

    Thank you, Pandora!  I really appreciate all your help and support.  You and Kim are a big help to me.  I'm so glad that the bond between  Harry and Severus is so real now.  For all the  hardships and abuse they've both suffered, they deserve to have that close bond, someone who is always there to love and support them.  I don't think the marriage situation is entirely 'real' to Harry...as I said,  he sees it as something that is so far in the future that it's difficult to comprehend, which is pretty normal at sixteen, I think...I hope.  But it is something that he has thought of in an abstract sort of way, if that makes sense.  

    >>>I wish so much that Dumbles would find a way to reverse the spell, and then Harry and Severus could truly be free to be a normal father and son.

    Now who said that DD would have anything to do with it?  Patience, my dear, patience...all in good time, you know.

    >>>Will Severus attend as a chaperone?  I know that he dearly misses stalking the halls, and handing out detentions.

    Lol!  I imagine Severus will be there, too.

     

    Thanks, Pandora!

     

     

     

     

Title: Chapter 68 24 Aug 2010 2:29 am
Reviewer: Lady Lanera (Signed) [Report This]
    Awe...Severus handled Harry's misgivings about the slavery spell rather beautifully. It's sad that Harry still worries what others think. I do wonder what Harry will look like under the Polyjuice. Are we going to find out either from Severus or Draco what was said at all? Good chapter.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Well, I'm not sure about showing the Severus and Draco scene...probably not, but if someone ever wanted to write some little side scenes from SC, I'm agreeable to that.   
Title: Chapter 68 24 Aug 2010 2:19 am
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed) [Report This]
    lovely conversation between sev and harry. our boy still has those deep-seated, forged into his very core, self worth issues doesn't he? not that the SPELL does anything to help matters there, but maybe SOMEDAY sev will convince him of his true worth.

    Lovely--warm fuzzies runing all over the place! :-)

    V.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Yes, Harry does still have some issues.  I think Severus has helped, but Harry was abused by the Dursleys for all his life and that kind of damage takes time to heal.  And yes, the spell doesn't help, certainly.
Title: Chapter 67 18 Aug 2010 5:01 pm
Reviewer: Lillyko (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wonderful chapter! I´m happy the boys get along and it´s wonderful to see their friendsship start to grow.
    Harry tries to help draco, I hope the little snakling won´t give up helping harry as well. they´ve been trough a lot...
    wonderful chapter, thanks so much and more please

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Yeah, I've enjoyed writing the developing friendship between the boys too, so I'm happy that you're enjoying it.  
Title: Chapter 67 13 Aug 2010 5:29 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Interesting and IC with Draco in this chapter thank you

    Author's Response: Thank you; glad you think so!  I wasn't sure how it would go over.
Title: Chapter 67 11 Aug 2010 7:46 pm
Reviewer: Severa (Signed) [Report This]
    Thanks for the update! I hope the next chapter arrives soon... (hint) :)

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Chapter 68 is up now.  Chapter 69 may be a couple weeks as I've just started teaching again and it's a busy time at first.  But I'll get to it asap.
Title: Chapter 67 11 Aug 2010 6:12 pm
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    Ahh good to see an update here :D
Title: Chapter 67 11 Aug 2010 4:51 pm
Reviewer: Morgana (Signed) [Report This]
    I really liked Draco in this chapter; you've evolved his personality beautifully and really brought out the sensitive side we only see glimpses of in the canon. It's very natural for him to want to 'put the boot in' first, rejecting Ron and Hermione so they can't reject him. Well written, interesting chapter with realistic dialogue and lots of interesting threads.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  That's a really interesting point, Morgana, about how Draco would not want to risk being rejected so he would do it first...and one that I think is very true for Draco's insecure state of mind right now. 
Title: Chapter 67 11 Aug 2010 8:36 am
Reviewer: Dream Painter (Signed) [Report This]
    It would seem our boys are really starting to trust one another, huh? Tis a long, slow process, but I've a feeling...

    Good chapter. Wish it was longer, but I guess I'll forgive ya. ;) Here's hoping for more, soon!

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