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Title: Chapter 67 11 Aug 2010 7:05 am
Reviewer: KimSpiritTalks (Signed) [Report This]
    Really great chapter! Draco was both an arrogant brat and an insecure little kid, very realistic for a kid his age. I enjoyed the back and forth a lot. Wonderful!
Title: Chapter 67 11 Aug 2010 5:02 am
Reviewer: Lady Lanera (Signed) [Report This]
    This chapter made me rather sad for poor Draco and Harry. They're both scarred emotionally by their experiences and seem to want to talk to others about it, but can't. It also makes me a bit worried for Draco's mental stability right now. Awesome job, though.
Title: Chapter 67 11 Aug 2010 3:18 am
Reviewer: lunaz (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Enjoyed the chapter. Liked how the conversation built up to such a serious discussion.
Title: Chapter 67 11 Aug 2010 2:33 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Yay!! I always get excited when I see an update from you Kristeh, and what a powerfully written one it is. I feel like a milestone was passed here. Not only has Harry let go of his anger and resentment towards Draco over the slavery spell, but he's opened up to the boy, almost more openly than he's done with Hermione and Ron. Of course, knowing that Draco has experienced such a horribly traumatic experience, makes Harry feel connected to Draco, and Draco can understand his feelings on a level that Hermione and Ron never will.

    Fantastic chapter Kristeh, and I'm dying to see what happens next, and if Harry will decide to go to the Yule Ball.
Title: Chapter 66 23 Jul 2010 5:59 am
Reviewer: Dream Painter (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw, poor Draco. What a dreadful place to leave it, too, you brat. Get to work!

    Sorry I didn't leave any reviews throughout the last twenty-some chapters. I was away at a 24hr shift with... inadequate 'net reception. >.< Loving it, though. Think I may go barmy waiting for upcoming chapters, though.

    Author's Response: Thanks again!  I'm really happy that you're liking SC.  I'm going to work on chapter 67 this weekend, so hopefully it'll be ready early next week. 
Title: Chapter 41 21 Jul 2010 6:01 pm
Reviewer: Dream Painter (Signed) [Report This]
    So many feel-good moments in this story - I'm loving it! ^^

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I'm happy you're liking it.
Title: Chapter 40 21 Jul 2010 5:28 am
Reviewer: Dream Painter (Signed) [Report This]
    Well, he's sorta getting the hang of it. Well, with Harry and his best friends, anyway. >.-

    I'm a bit peeved with Snape, though. I mean, yeah Draco screwed up, but the boy doesn't know how bad. I can't help but think that Severus' refusal to talk to him a bit is just going to cause more issues. In fact, I'm certain of it.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks again!  As far as Severus' teaching style and the way he treats the other Gryffindors, well, I thought it might be a little difficult for him to completely change.  He has changed a lot, but he's still sort of coming to terms with it all himself.  And it makes for a little tension in Severus' adn Harry's relationship and maybe keeps it from being too perfect.  That was the idea anyway.

    Yeah, Severus is perhaps a bit unfair to Draco, considering that Draco doesn't even understand what happened or why Severus has come around to being on 'Harry's side'.

    >>>I can't help but think that Severus' refusal to talk to him a bit is just going to cause more issues.  In fact, I'm certain of it.

    Oh, absolutely!  Truer words were never spoken.  Thanks again!

Title: Chapter 36 21 Jul 2010 1:26 am
Reviewer: Dream Painter (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw... I almost feel sorry for Draco. Okay, okay, I do feel sorry for Draco - a little bit.

    The new school year's begun. It shall be interesting to see how everything goes...

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Yeah, Draco has some things going on with him too now, that no one knows about yet, so he's having a very difficult time.  I'm glad you're sympathetic.
Title: Chapter 32 20 Jul 2010 10:34 pm
Reviewer: Dream Painter (Signed) [Report This]
    Just wanted to let you know that I'm really enjoying this story so far. You have a wonderful writing style.

    I read the previous chapters last night - your story helped me survive a 12-hour, no-sleeping shift. Thanks!

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I'm so happy that you're enjoying SC, and that sounds like a rough shift, all right.  I hope you've had some rest  by now.
Title: Chapter 17 13 Jul 2010 7:01 am
Reviewer: Severa (Signed) [Report This]
    I know I'm a bit late in reviewing this, but I am definitely enjoying this story. Since I am only on chapter 17, I have a feeling it will be a late night for me. This is really good!

    Author's Response: Oh, I'm late in replying to you too!  Sorry about that.  I'm really glad that you're enjoying Slave Child.  I hope you've caught up on sleep since then, lol.  Thanks so much!

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