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Reviews For Slave Child
Title: Chapter 55 20 Oct 2017 6:36 am
Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed) [Report This]
    Was that a suicide attempt or really an accident? Though, I am pretty sure no one stabs themselves in the chest for suicide.
Title: Chapter 54 20 Oct 2017 6:19 am
Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed) [Report This]
    So, a little of Draco's POV too?
Title: Chapter 49 20 Oct 2017 5:19 am
Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed) [Report This]
    Well, even I misunderstood Dumbledore, I am glad that you gave me a chance to see Draco humiliated.
Title: Chapter 48 19 Oct 2017 6:39 pm
Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed) [Report This]
    Muahahahaha! And what is the certainty that Draco won't try suicide?
Title: Chapter 47 19 Oct 2017 6:33 pm
Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed) [Report This]
    Harumph! I really just want to strangle Draco now, but I guess seeing Narcissa get killed in front of him is some of the repayment from karma, still I want him to be punished even more. Will Harry ever return?
Title: Chapter 46 19 Oct 2017 6:20 pm
Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed) [Report This]
    No, Harry is having a pneumonia induced nightmare, isn't he? Please tell me he is! Oh god, please! No, that can't be!!! That just isn't. It can't be happening.
    Oh god! No! No! No!
Title: Chapter 45 19 Oct 2017 6:00 pm
Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed) [Report This]
    I dunno, Severu cried for the first time in years, that was sweet. Even my heart shattered when Harry asked if Severus really forgave him. You know what, I really think that it serves Harry right after suffering from pneumonia, he shouldn't have gone off, he should have known that Severus would think only of his well being. He should have known and he should have had told the others so too, especially people like Seamus.
Title: Chapter 44 19 Oct 2017 5:49 pm
Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed) [Report This]
    I really don't like it. I really really don't like it. Of course I like your story, I really don't like the fact about what Harry is doing, a suicidal Harry is almost better then this one, almost. I don't even want to read it, but the curiosity is getting better of me. I hate Harry for doing this, for going to play, and I hate Severus for doing this, for not allowing Harry to play. Arrrghh! I haven't even read the full chapter.
Title: Chapter 43 19 Oct 2017 5:26 pm
Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed) [Report This]
    Tut tut, Harry is getting a bit pissed of, isn't he?
    Poor Harry and poor Severus, I know Severus wants what is best for him, but it is hard to see Harry not playing Quidditch. It is also hard to see Harry hurting Severus with his words,I also don't like it when Harry refers to himself as Slave, it just isn't right. Slaves and Masters don't go around telling each other 'I love you.'
    Any idea what is getting Harry so pissed of? First when he couldn't do the non-verble spells the first time around and now this.
Title: Chapter 42 19 Oct 2017 4:52 pm
Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed) [Report This]
    Something is definitely wrong with Him, of course. Malfoy, that is.

    Author's Response: Oh yes.  Definitely.

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