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Title: Chapter 63 14 May 2010 4:52 am
Reviewer: fishie11 (Signed) [Report This]
    I absolutely love this story and can't wait for the next chapter!

    Author's Response: Thank you!
Title: Chapter 63 10 May 2010 3:39 am
Reviewer: SunshineSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Awesome chapter! I love the fact the Severus and Harry's grows stonger as time goes by. His reaction to Harry's compliment was spot on.
    I hope that Remus will acknowledge Harry's feeling and that the two of them can work things out.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Having the father/son relationship continue to grow and become stronger, and to face new difficulties, is probably the biggest challenge in writing SC now, but also the greatest enjoyment for me.  Thank you! 
Title: Chapter 63 09 May 2010 10:25 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter liked the ending!

    Author's Response: Thank you!
Title: Chapter 63 07 May 2010 3:35 pm
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow, im with Harry in that one lol, that meeting was very anti-climatic...maybe he is biding his time before he demands to know just why Remus has been out of touch? hmm i'll have to wait and see :)
Title: Chapter 63 07 May 2010 3:35 pm
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow, im with Harry in that one lol, that meeting was very anti-climatic...maybe he is biding his time before he demands to know just why Remus has been out of touch? hmm i'll have to wait and see :)

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Don't worry, Harry and Remus will eventually talk things through, but I felt that the timing wasn't right yet.  Severus and Dumbledore were there observing, and Remus especially, is a bit inhibited when it comes to talking about emotions.  I think Remus is afraid to get very close to people and, while he's kind, he prefers to keep his relationship with Harry strictly teacher/student, with some emotional distance between them. 
Title: Chapter 63 07 May 2010 2:37 pm
Reviewer: Morgana (Signed) [Report This]
    Brilliant chapter; I thought Severus' reaction to Harry's praise was very sweet and definately in character; he's always been so undervalued that having a just complient would completely wrong-foot him. Although it is sad that Harry blames himself to such an extent, I thought that his feelings on the prospect of seeing Remus were very natural and in character, as was Draco's reaction. I hope that, in attempting to reconcile Draco to working with Remus, Harry will discover that Remus does not blame him for Sirius' death.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you, Morgana!  I'm happy that you enjoyed the chapter.  There was a lot of emotional stuff going on here, with Harry and Severus growing even closer and Harry helping to heal Severus, with the Harry and Remus reunion, and Draco so traumatized.  I'm also trying to portray some foreshadowing for future plot events (some action again!) with Greyback.  It was kind of draining to write, lol, but I enjoyed it so I'm happy that you liked it too.

     

Title: Chapter 63 06 May 2010 10:01 pm
Reviewer: DS (Anonymous) [Report This]
    It is unexpected.. Remus is a kind and shrewd person. Why won't he take the time to acknowledge Harry's feelings?

    Author's Response:

    Thank you!  I think that Remus is basically a kind person, too, but I also think he has a lot of issues in letting himself become close to others, stemming both from insecurities caused by being a werewolf and more importantly, from losing so many people he loved in such shocking and terrible ways.  He lost two close friends, who were like family, to murder and another to betrayal.  So I think Remus has some things that he needs to work through too.  While he cares for Harry, I think he has deliberately kept emotional distance between them and has tried to keep from becoming genuinely close.

    Thanks again!

Title: Chapter 63 06 May 2010 4:28 pm
Reviewer: Quynce (Signed) [Report This]
    Delightfully awkard...I love it when an author does ambivalence well. I think it feels very right that Harry is holding a lot of feelings in and trying to take his lead from Lupin (who really isn't helping all that much). I'm eager to hear about Draco's problem as well.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I tried to portray the reunion between Harry and Remus as awkward, with Harry not sure what to feel or expect.  More about Draco and his troubles in the next chapter. 
Title: Chapter 63 06 May 2010 10:15 am
Reviewer: JLAJ (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I certainly did enjoy this chapter, and I can't wait to read more!

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I'm glad you liked it.
Title: Chapter 63 06 May 2010 8:56 am
Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oh - what a way to leave it, this was a great chapter, please post soon so we know what happens to Draco.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I'll try.

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