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Title: Chapter 60 15 Feb 2010 9:00 pm
Reviewer: writeurlife (Signed) [Report This]
    Please update soon. I'm curious as to the solution Severus and Albus will come up with. I have to admit that I'm starting to emphasize with Draco, some. Maybe. Ugh, I am, damn you. I don't usually like him at all.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I never really liked canon Draco much either.  He had potential to change and redeem himself, but imo, he never really managed it.  I did learn to like fanon Draco, at least some versions of him, and decided to see what I could do with him in a story.  I'm happy if he's beginning to reach you too. 
Title: Chapter 60 15 Feb 2010 5:53 pm
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed) [Report This]
    YOu have this GIFT for twisting my instides into knots until tears run down my face. (granted, the feeling started in the last chapter--which I always go back and read) Between "the talk" and then Sev's thoughts about how to handle both boys, I have a very soggy klenex--I'm such a wuss.

    Great chapter--I'm glad to see that Draco is really thinking about things.

    V.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I hope reading isn't too painful for you, lol!
Title: Chapter 60 15 Feb 2010 8:49 am
Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    People can change, loved the conversation between sev and harry! Love this story.

    Author's Response: Thank you so much!  I'm so happy that you're still enjoying it.
Title: Chapter 60 15 Feb 2010 12:26 am
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    Ahh Harry/Severus mushyness, never can I resist! im up for any excuse that has a bit of hugging for the 2 of them hehe, good to see Draco beginning to make changes, im sure he is a sweetheart under all that Lucius training he had :)

    Author's Response: I can't resist either, lol.  Thank you!
Title: Chapter 60 14 Feb 2010 4:21 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, I know this is strange, but I feel so bad for BOTH boys. Draco seems like a really lost little boy, who just needs guidance and he has no one, and he knows that Severus' main concern now is Harry, so he must feel like he's lost everyone.

    And then poor Harry, who feels threatened by Draco's presence and the amount of time that Severus is required to spend with Draco also.

    I sincerely hope that Severus can find a solution so that both boys needs are met. I feel so sad, but hopeful at the same time. I think that if anyone can find a solution to satisfy both boys needs, it will be Severus!

    Oh, and I can see change beginning to blossom in Draco, which is very heartening. He is still going to need constant guidance, but it is a very encouraging sign that he told Severus that he didn't like the actions of Voldemort, or his followers.

    I hope that Draco can stay on the path of the straight an narrow, and that Severus can find someone who'll be able to focus their attention solely on him. Both boys need that stable, strong father-figure.

    Great great chapter Kristeh. I can't wait to read the next chapter.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you, Pandora!  I was really hoping to portray both boys in a sympathetic light.  I know full well that some people just don't like Draco and that's ok...there are some characters that I don't like and don't sympathize with also, and some people consider his actions towards Harry to be unforgivable.  While they certainly have a right to their opinion, I do think that's a little harsh towards a 16 yr. old kid who, in this story, was also a victim of abuse and neglect.  I think what makes me see Draco as redeemable is that he didn't know what the slavery spell when he cast it, and he wouldn't have if he had known, and when he went to the papers, he was still suffering so from the aftermath of his mother's murder and from being tortured by DEs, that he almost wasn't in his right mind...at least he was in a lot of pain and he lashed out without thinking.  It's not admirable, but I think it is understandable...sort of.  But some other changes are coming for our boys, so there's still a lot to work out.

     

    Thanks again!

Title: Chapter 59 08 Feb 2010 3:28 am
Reviewer: anon (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great chapter!

    Author's Response: Thank you!
Title: Chapter 59 06 Feb 2010 2:41 am
Reviewer: KimSpiritTalks (Signed) [Report This]
    Wonderful interactions here! Possibly my favorite moment in fandom: "And no one insults my son with impunity, so unless you wish to disembowel frogs this evening, I suggest you refrain from doing so." Terrific! lol Loved it! And the conversation with Ron and Hermione, coming to Harry's rescue... YAY TEAM! :D

    Author's Response: Oh, thank you!  It's hard to write Sev as being kind and loving to Harry, but still having some snark to him, so I hope I did okay.  Thanks again.
Title: Chapter 58 06 Feb 2010 2:36 am
Reviewer: KimSpiritTalks (Signed) [Report This]
    Hi Kristeh! I love Harry's empathy in this story. He's such a great kid. Understanding that an enemy's pain may be worse than your own is such a mature feeling. I really love how you've written him! And then turning around and feeling fear over losing Snape to Draco, that just breaks my heart. So much conflict. I love it!

    Author's Response: Thank you, Kim!  Well, you know how I feel about my Harry, lol.   
Title: Chapter 59 28 Jan 2010 1:59 am
Reviewer: severitusfan4ever (Signed) [Report This]
    Amazing chapter!!! I can't wait for Sevvy's reaction :) gives me the warm fuzzies *snort*

    Author's Response: Thank you!  You can never have enough warm fuzzies, lol!
Title: Chapter 59 27 Jan 2010 11:37 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    You have set up a nice bit of angst her e thank you I liked the potion lesson nice that Severus is now so patient. Thank you for updating

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I really enjoyed writing that little snippet of a potions lesson to show how different things are now with Severus and Harry, so I'm really happy you liked that part.

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