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Reviews For Slave Child
I can't help but feel his jealousy towards Draco and his deep seated wish to have him out of the house while still feeling sorry for him. Author's Response: >>>I feel so involved in Harry's emotions in this story. Thank you; that is such a wonderful compliment! I'm glad you liked the story. Author's Response: >>>I feel so involved in Harry's emotions in this story. Thank you; that is such a wonderful compliment! I'm glad you liked the story.
Author's Response: Thank you! I love Ron and Hermione and I've always thought the friendship between the the three of them was really special, so of course I had to show it in my story. I'm glad you liked it.
Can't wait to read the rest! -Abigail Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm really happy that you're enjoying the story!
Doing the happy dance that you've updated again! I always get so excited when I see that you've updated, and what a wonderfully emotional chapter it was. I'm so worried for Harry, and his emotional stability, but I really do think that his friends knocked a little sense into him. Especially Ron! He cracked me up with that line. I really hope that Harry follows through on his promise to talk to Severus; he's imagining all sorts of things that aren't true. He needs to talk to his father, who I'm sure will settle his doubts, once and for all. Great chappie, but then again, I expect no less from you!! I'm simply on the edge of my seat for the next chapter. I'm dying to see "the talk"!! Author's Response: Hi, Pandora, Thank you! I'm always happy when you update too! I'm so happy you enjoyed the chapter.
Brilliant chapter, btw. And it was just the right length--I'm leaving here just in time for work. Author's Response: >>>I want to hear them talk at dinner. Well, you just might get to in the next chapter, lol! Thank you, and I'm glad you made it to work on time.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm going to write this weekend.
Author's Response: Thank you! Yeah, Ron and Hermione are great friends, aren't they? I think Harry and Sev will have some talking and working things out in the next chapter.
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Author's Response: Thank you! >>>I think he may be needing an extra long, extra big hug from his dad Sounds good to me, lol.
Especially loved: 'desperately trying to squash an anxious, hurt voice in his mind that put his greatest fear into words. I'm losing him. He'd rather be with Draco than with me.' That was the epitome of that feeling you get when you think you're going to lose someone important to someone else; very very well written ^^ And I'm more glad than I can say that Harry isnt like me - the whole time he's been troubled about this I've been thinking he should cut and run from the relationship with Sev before Sev does it to him - thank God your Harry is more persistent ^-^ And your writing really benefits from the direction you found in the way of future plot. *bows to your muse* (very glad it returned so spectacularly ^-^) Cant wait for more... but then, I'm usually just as impatient so dont rush or anything, I'm happy rereading this 'til there's more new stuff to throw myself into ^-^ Author's Response: Thank you! >>>And I'm more glad than I can say that Harry isn't like me-the whole time he's been troubled about this I've been thinking he should cut and run from the relationship with Sev before Sev does it to him... Well, Harry can't quite do that as the slavery spell would kill him if he tried to escape, after all. And it says that he has to live with Severus (for at least 9 months of a year), so running off just isn't an option there. But otherwise, Harry might be tempted. Thank you. I'm going to write again this weekend, but I don't know if I'll be able to get the chapter finished. I'll try though. |
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