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Title: Chapter 58 18 Jan 2010 11:47 pm
Reviewer: DS (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Good one!

    Author's Response: Thank you!
Title: Chapter 58 18 Jan 2010 10:02 pm
Reviewer: NotEvenHere (Anonymous) [Report This]
    That was a great chapter! It was so sad to have Harry be jealous but totally understandable. I'm sort of wondering if maybe Severus really didn't send those tickets. Where is he anyway? Did he fall asleep in Draco's room?

    Author's Response: Thank you, OE!  Yeah, I think it would be hard for Harry to see Severus begin to warm up towards Draco.  He doesn't want to be jealous or to feel threatened, but he just can't help it.  Harry and Sev will talk a little bit more about the tickets in the next chapter, and don't worry, Sev's around.   

    Author's Response: Thank you, OE!  Yeah, I think it would be hard for Harry to see Severus begin to warm up towards Draco.  He doesn't want to be jealous or to feel threatened, but he just can't help it.  Harry and Sev will talk a little bit more about the tickets in the next chapter, and don't worry, Sev's around.   
Title: Chapter 58 18 Jan 2010 7:58 pm
Reviewer: LaileeJane (Signed) [Report This]
    It was nice to see Draco acting human, and I feel so bad for Harry--things are just never easy for the poor kid. Another wonderful installment, I don't think you could write poorly if you tried!

    Author's Response: Thank you!  That is so kind of you to say.  I appreciate it and I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter.
Title: Chapter 58 18 Jan 2010 7:56 pm
Reviewer: jolisgsd (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Nice chapter and good portrayal of Harry's seesawing emotions.

    Author's Response: Thank you, and yes, Harry's emotions are swinging back and forth...he's really not as secure as he and Severus both thought, unfortunately. 
Title: Chapter 58 18 Jan 2010 7:37 pm
Reviewer: autumnamberleaves (Signed) [Report This]
    Good chapter, I like how this is going. You know what, I sort of imagine your writing style and set up similar to that of "AYLNO" by Aspeninthesunlight, that is high praise from me. Great job. :-D

    Author's Response: Oh, thank you!  And yes, that is high praise indeed!  I admire Aspen's saga so much; she is truly a genius. 
Title: Chapter 58 18 Jan 2010 7:19 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw, Harry's emotions are getting all tangled again. I'm so worried about him. He's assuming the worst again. He really needs to get over this "jumping to conclusions", and talk to Severus about his insecurities and feelings of jealousy over Draco; that's what a father is for--to talk over your problems. But since Harry's never had a father before (well...at least not since he was too young to remember) he's not comfortable relying on anyone.

    I am really beginning to feel the tug of sympathy for Draco. No one deserves to witness their mother being tortured, even Draco. He IS only sixteen...still a child.

    Oh, Kristeh, I'm so excited about the ideas that you have for this story, and I simply can't wait for the next update.

    Wonderful chappie as usual; chalk full of wonderful descriptions and vivid imagery. I just love your writing. ;)

    Author's Response:

    Oh, thank you, Pandora!  Yeah, Harry does need to not jump to conclusions and have a long talk with Severus...but as you said, he's never had that security before and at the moment, he's feeling more upset and emotional than even he realizes, I think.

    I'm glad you're starting to feel sympathetic for Draco.  He has done some awful things, and maybe he still doesn't fully comprehend that...but he is learning to, and I do think that there is some good inside and he's worth saving.

    Thanks again; I'm really excited about the new ideas too, and think they should be fun to write. 

     

Title: Chapter 57 05 Jan 2010 3:49 am
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed) [Report This]
    Harry is a good kid. He has a wonderful heart and does what is best--even if it isn't what he wants to do.

    I loved this chapter. Great work!

    V.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Yeah, that's how I see Harry, too.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Yeah, that's how I see Harry, too.
Title: Chapter 57 04 Jan 2010 11:24 am
Reviewer: regs (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great story. Looking forward to the next chapter. Any idea when it will be up? Curious to what's gonna happen with Draco. Why, oh why, did I have to get hooked on a work in progress??? LOL! In all honesty, I'm loving the story though, and it's worth the wait on an update.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I'm working on the next chapter, but it will probably not be ready before the weekend.  I know...it's always so hard to wait for a WIP.  I hate it when I'm reading, lol!  I try to update as often as I can, but real life does sometimes keep me busy, too.  But I am very commited to SC.  Thank you again!
Title: Chapter 57 26 Dec 2009 4:53 am
Reviewer: Victory-Starr (Signed) [Report This]
    And I am caught up! Whoo-hoo! You have successfully hooked me! I'm really looking forward to more, in which I'll be able to leave more detailed, well thought out reviews. Haha, all these chapters have jumbled my brain. ;-)

    Merry Christmas!!!

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Glad you're caught up.  I've been busy with family stuff and all lately, but I do want to work on the next chapter this weekend.
Title: Chapter 27 24 Dec 2009 5:38 pm
Reviewer: Victory-Starr (Signed) [Report This]
    Awwwww. Is it alright if that's all I say? Cause I'm not sure I can say much else.

    Lovely. Sigh. I love them both.

    Awwwwwwwwww..........

    Author's Response: Oh, thank you!  These chapters are still my favorite part of the story...I'm glad you've l;iked them too.

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