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Title: Chapter 39 19 Oct 2017 1:13 pm
Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed) [Report This]
    I suppose that Severus agreed to go to Prince Hall in the end?
Title: Chapter 37 19 Oct 2017 12:46 pm
Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed) [Report This]
    I am excited to find out what is wrong with Malfoy. If Voldemort was still alive, I would have thought that he was going to be initiated against his wishes.

    Author's Response: No, not that, but Draco definitely had a rough summer.
Title: Chapter 35 19 Oct 2017 10:59 am
Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed) [Report This]
    Hm-Hm, this chapter was nice, well as I already said, the Slavery Spell is quite slack, but I didn't want it too hard either, I just like a Harry in pain, not a Harry humiliated, what ever, I know it is a bit strange.

    Author's Response: Thanks!  I was more interested in exploring the emotional aspects of the slavery spell.
Title: Chapter 34 19 Oct 2017 10:46 am
Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed) [Report This]
    There is too much fluff, don't you think? Like, Severus hugging Harry almost twice every day, my father hugs me maybe once every year, you know. But, well, I don't have much problem with it except for the fact that it looks OOC.

    Author's Response: Yea, I think you're right--a bit too much fluff, but oh well, the fluffier, the better, sometimes at least.
Title: Chapter 33 19 Oct 2017 10:32 am
Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed) [Report This]
    Never mind, I got my answer to the previous review. Harumph, Harry overthinks a bit, doesn't he? He just forgot to leave a simple note, he even said sorry even then he thinks that Severus would leave him? Of course I know that he has a low self esteem, but of man, that was pretty pathetic, even for Harry, who seems to be an all time low in this story.

    Author's Response: Yes, Harry might be at an all time low, but hey, I had to try to keep some drama going, didn't I?
Title: Chapter 32 19 Oct 2017 10:29 am
Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh my, I had waited for so long for that apology, I thought that it would never come.
    Umm, I also don't see Harry leaving a note to Severus, is that just a typo or.............?

    Author's Response: No he didn't leave a note--bad Harry!
Title: Chapter 31 19 Oct 2017 7:26 am
Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed) [Report This]
    Things are moving a bit fast, but that is fine with me. Thsi story is brilliant. Even after getting as many reviews as 1000, you still like them, I suppose, me too, I love them, you know the quote, what comes around, goes around. So, I am hoping I will get some reviews on ff.net too. Whatever,I thought Severus knew about the cupboard, I never knew that Harry's favourite colours were red and gold, though mine is blue. That adoption, I thought that the slavery spell would be broken by the adoption as a son can't be your slave.

    Author's Response: Thank you for all the lovely reviews!  And yep, they're always nice to receive!  The slavery spell is resolved by the end of the story.
Title: Chapter 30 12 Oct 2017 5:11 pm
Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed) [Report This]
    Huuuuhhh.. This chapter was so satisfying that it got a sigh out of me. It was so beautifully written.

    Author's Response: Thank you! 
Title: Chapter 26 01 Oct 2017 4:50 pm
Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed) [Report This]
    "I'll help you," Hermione, usually the voice of reason, promptly agreed.
    I completely love this chapter! So so so awesome. The way you have portrayed Ron and Hermione, they are a bit OOC but I like them like this too! I would have copied and pasted the entire conversation, but I settled for my favourite line. (Quite difficult to choose.)

    Author's Response: I've always loved Ron and Hermione!  Who wouldn't want to have such loyal friends who will always be there for you?  Harry was very fortunate to have the two of them. 
Title: Chapter 25 01 Oct 2017 4:43 pm
Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh la la. I love this. At first I thought that Harry was going to slit his wrists. Though I liked that method better, this one was good too! Lets see Ron and Hermione's reactions too!
    You see, your Harry is quite realistic, who wouldn't want to die after all that Harry has suffered. I guess the only thing that kept Harry going on in the canon series is the need to destroy Voldemort. I guess after that Ginny was enough for him to have the will to live. He has suffered quite enough and the Dursleys had always made sure that he had a low self esteem. It was only logical that Harry tried suicide. The slavery spell just added to his list of thing to die for.

    Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you're still reading and enjoying the story.  Yes, I always thought it was a little unrealistic for Harry to be so resilient after all he had been through, so I wanted to show him being more affected emotionally.  Thankfully, he does have wonderful friends to help him through it all, and now he has Severus as well. 

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