Nice reflection of Severus's at the end, there. Sums up his dilemma quite well.
Author's Response: Thank you! Yes, Severus is in a difficult place. He cares for both boys, despite his anger with Draco. But Harry comes first, no doubt about that.
| Title: Chapter 51
| 25 Aug 2009 2:43 am
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| Reviewer: Vicky (Anonymous)
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Noooooooo! *sobs brokenly* Whyyyyy? LOL, I hate it when I get so into a story, so used to having the next chapter just being there, and then I reach the end. That's what I was crying about. I really, really hate it. On the other hand, I really, really adore the story! The bit where they were flying was sooo great, and I loved seeing Norie and Zan again. I was very glad Severus still liked Draco, and is feeling sorry for him, and wants to help him!!! It was good to have an insight as to how Severus felt about it all. I hope Norie gets Harry out of it, I can just see him agreeing with everything Harry is saying about how resonable it is for Harry to want to go home, and that Harry's not hiding from everything, and then Harry finally snapping and growing back that Gryffindor spine. LOL, actually, that would mean that Severus would have had to talk to Harry first to get him mixed up like that. Anyway. I really hope Harry can face Draco soon, he's going to need to. I also hope Severus tells Draco that Harry was the one to allow him to come here, although maybe not because that would hurt Draco, and that he corrects Draco's assumption that Harry wants tolord over him, etc etc. Why am I writing all of this? You'll go your own way and it will be incredible no matter what I hope! I guess it just shows how immersed I am in the story that I can't stop thinking of what's going to happen next! Anyway, as always exceptional in every way, particuarly the bit about Severus' emotions! Adore it, can't wait for an update!
Author's Response: Thank you so much, Vicky, for your wonderful reviews! I'm sorry it has taken so long to respond, but I have had pre-planning at my school this past week and scarcely had time to breathe. I think Draco will find out at some point that Harry is the one who spared him from Azkaban, but I'm not sure at what point that will come out. I'm happy so many people have commented on Severus' thoughts and emotions, because I did want to show that he is in a difficult spot, too. But Harry comes first with him now and always will. I will try to write some more this weekend, but I don't know how much will get done. I have a lot of stuff to catch up on this weekend. Thanks again, very much!
| Title: Chapter 48
| 25 Aug 2009 2:21 am
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| Reviewer: Vicky (Anonymous)
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Woot! *dances around chanting* Go Harry! go Harry! Go Harry! He is such a very good person! Not sure how much I like what they're doing to Draco, but it makes sense, and I hope it helps him. as always, incredible talent, ingenious and amazingly brilliant storyline, the emotions are perfect, and..and...words fail me as to your excellence. ADORE IT AND NEEEEEDDDD TO READ ON!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I just love Harry and I think he is an amazing kid, too.
| Title: Chapter 47
| 25 Aug 2009 2:15 am
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Oh no! Draco! Poor guy! I don't think Harry is OOC, he lost everything he had made himself into, and independant man, he's not a person anymore, he's a possesion no matter how much people soften the blow it is understnadable that he feels like that, even if he should have got over it by now. Draco is in character, too, I think. I am very, very sympathetic towards him, and I think you set the stage for this well. I think he will seem more in character as we go on, but I also think we can't say if Draco is in or out of character, as we only ever see the mask he puts on, not who he is. Anyway, brilliant as always hope Severus realises he needs to snap Harry out of it, even if he does hurt him a little, it will be better for him in the long run. Also hope Harry grows a spine and realises having evryone know is not the end of the world as he knows it, though I am sympathetic towards him...for now. LOL Anyway, must read on! You are incredibly talented.
Author's Response: Thank you! I have enjoyed reading your reviews so much. It really means a lot when someone is enjoying the story and thinking of the characters. I think you made some good points about Draco. Unfortunately, he learned to project a mask early on. He does have a lot of prejudices and beliefs that need to be corrected, but he is young and he can change. Thanks again.
| Title: Chapter 44
| 25 Aug 2009 1:27 am
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I thought Severus was going to come out and order harry to stop, so very, very glad that didn't happen! Brilliant as always! NEED to read on, so can't write more about the awesome talent you have. ;)
Author's Response: Thank you!
| Title: Chapter 51
| 24 Aug 2009 5:20 pm
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| Reviewer: Poirot (Anonymous)
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Great chapter! I really hope Severus can help Draco without Harry feeling betrayed.
Author's Response: Thank you! Well, Severus will try, but it is a tricky situation for him. He may make mistakes, but I think if so, his mistakes will be more with Draco because he is so determined not to let Harry down.
| Title: Chapter 51
| 24 Aug 2009 1:09 pm
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| Reviewer: gin (Anonymous)
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now snape thinks his first loyalty was to harry but im not sure.draco can be evil sometimes.he can doing bad something again but snape accuse to harry.im not trust draco and im not belive second chance.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing!
Ahh so good to see Harry back at the manor having a good time flying with his dad :)
Author's Response: Thank you! I really enjoyed writing the flying scene, short as it was. It was nice to let Harry and Severus have some fun and forget about everything else for a while.
| Title: Chapter 51
| 24 Aug 2009 3:57 am
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| Reviewer: shan (Anonymous)
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hope that sev would be able to help draco resolve some of his feelings. love the familiarity between sev and harry. do update soon.
Author's Response: Thank you! Severus has a fine line to walk, doesn't he? He wants to help Draco, but he is determined to put his own son's needs first.
Great chapter xxx
Author's Response: Thank you! Sorry for taking so long to respond, but this past week has been crazy at school!
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