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Reviews For Slave Child
Title: Chapter 50 17 Aug 2009 8:00 pm
Reviewer: Starbuck1332 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Awesome!! This story just keeps getting better and better. Thank you for the update.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I really appreciate that!
Title: Chapter 50 17 Aug 2009 4:48 pm
Reviewer: Poirot (Signed) [Report This]
    Another great chapter! Thanks so much for sharing your work with us.

    Author's Response: Thank you!
Title: Chapter 50 17 Aug 2009 3:27 pm
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww that was a little emotional at the end there lol, all those hugs and love going on, I had a little lump in my throat too :) im looking forward to them being back at the manor too :)

    Author's Response: Thanks, I do like mushy emotional scenes, what can I say?  I think it will be interesting to be back at Prince Hall again, too.  Thanks again!
Title: Chapter 50 17 Aug 2009 3:03 am
Reviewer: jessirose85 (Signed) [Report This]
    I am sorry but I was crying all through that chapter and it was emotional xx

    Great writing xx

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Hope you didn't cry too much!
Title: Chapter 50 16 Aug 2009 10:10 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw, poor Harry. This decision to accept Dumbledore's suggestion is going to be painful and difficult. But I'm so pleased that he has Severus' support and guidance.

    I really love how close that they've become and that Severus is seeing Harry as his son, and not just his ward. It's going to be difficult times ahead, but I'm sure that Severus is going to be there every step of the way to hold out a steadying hand to Harry.

    I'm so anxious to see how Draco is going to fit into the story, and how Harry will deal with Draco being HIS slave.

    I thought that it as really sweet when Neville offered to talk to his Uncle Algie, about whoever wrote the article at the Prophet, and Severus' response that he would welcome Neville at his home, and telling Neville that he's been a good friend to Harry.

    I'm so excited for the next chapter Kristeh. Beautifully written as usual.

    Author's Response: Thanks, Pandora!  Yea, Harry is still conflicted about it all right now and determined to not have anything to do with Draco.  We shall see how that works out, hmm.  And I just couldn't leave Neville out.  I love Neville.  He's a great kid and I have always wanted Severus to see Neville's great qualities and to accept him as Harry's friend.
Title: Chapter 49 15 Aug 2009 9:35 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Well, I'm just pleased as punch that you've updated here again, and not let thoughtless people get you down.

    Great chapter, and you didn't disappoint me at all! I love how Draco is being forced to realise that his actions have consequences.

    Don't let anyone say otherwise Kristeh, this story is beautifully written, and I hope that everyone is just going to have trust in you and see what you have planned before jumping the gun and thinking they know what story you are writing.

    Continue to write YOUR story and be true to yourself, and I know that it's going to be wonderful.

    I just can't wait to see what happens once Draco comes home with Harry and Sev. I can't wait to see the fireworks. I'm so excited! I know that whatever you write, is going to be awesome.

    Author's Response: Thanks, Pandora!
Title: Chapter 49 15 Aug 2009 7:26 am
Reviewer: Jazzy (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I think I'm reading more out of curiosity then anything else, and you really are an amazing writer. I just still can't decide whether I can get over the last chapter.

    Author's Response: Thanks for the compliment.  Whether you read or not is your decision, of course. 
Title: Chapter 49 15 Aug 2009 7:13 am
Reviewer: Aspen in the Sunlight (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oh, this was *wonderful*. And I don't mean that in a Draco-gets-his kind of way. It was just wonderful!!!

    I'm really looking forward to some Harry and Draco interaction, to see them becoming, dare I say it, a little bit like friends? Or perhaps even brothers?

    I know, I shouldn't push my luck!

    Um... only problem I have isn't your fault at all, but I *really* want the "print whole story" view to load the entire story so far -- I like to read offline, and I like to have the whole story at my fingertips...

    and the print whole story function loads an error page, waaaaaah!!!

    I wonder, do you have the whole story in one file at your end? Or do you archive anywhere else, at a site where this function might be working?

    I'm not logged in, so if you want to reply feel free to drop a note to my email....

    Aspen

    Author's Response: Thank you, Aspen!  Well, there will be some Harry and Draco interaction, and some Harry and Severus interaction, and who knows?  Maby even some Harry and the Giant Squid interaction, lol!  Thanks again.  I appreciate it. 
Title: Chapter 48 10 Aug 2009 6:30 am
Reviewer: Ruth (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Good chapter!

    Author's Response: Thank you so much!  I'm glad you liked it.
Title: Chapter 11 09 Aug 2009 6:10 am
Reviewer: Ivy-Green (Signed) [Report This]
    Yay for being human Snape! *claps* Very good! And poor Harry must really be confused. Nice Snape is such a rare occurrence that never seems real when he is. Very good! (as usual)

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Oh, yes, I think Harry must be very confused right now.  He has no idea how to respond to Severus, if he's not being snide and hostile. 

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