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Reviews For Slave Child
Title: Chapter 9 23 Sep 2017 5:23 pm
Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed) [Report This]
    This story gets better and better, I love it. I don't clearly know but I have a vague idea that I have read it before, whatever, I love it as much as the first time.
    I really like a guilt ridden Snape, because something happened to Harry, you will find a challenge named "Snape Rage" I guess you can add that too, you see, I want Harry to not have done anything but Snape blaming him and because of which it has drastic consequences. Your writing style too is really good, your sentence construction leaves little to be desired. If my guardian wasn't hovering over me like a hawk, I would have read the whole bloody night! But alas, everything can't happen as we want so I guess I would finish your story in about, um, 4 days? A really nice story by the way, though I think the Slave bond is a little slack, anyway, the less humiliating it is for Harry, the better, I read another story in which the Slavery spell was a lot more demanding,(Coals of Fire) *shudder*. Though that story was also good, I like this one better.
    Thanks for writing this story!

    Author's Response: Thanks so much for your kind compliments!  I'm glad you're enjoying my little monster of a story, lol.  I hope you will continue to read and enjoy!
Title: Chapter 79 30 Jun 2017 5:54 pm
Reviewer: Clarissa (Signed) [Report This]
    Read it all in three days! Fantastic, amazing, love story! Thanks!
    I hope that you will continue this story, please.
    It's long time since it's stop.
    Sorry for my english but I am italian ;)

    Author's Response: Thank you very much!  I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Title: Chapter 24 29 Mar 2016 2:48 am
Reviewer: Amy (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww... I love the change in Severus' feelings towards Harry. I've never reviewed this story before, but it has always been one of my favorite Snape and Harry stories. Absolutely amazing. :)

    Author's Response: Thank you so much!  That's very kind and I'm glad you enjoyed the story.
Title: Chapter 79 19 Mar 2016 3:00 am
Reviewer: reé (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I love the development in this story! I also think it's really interesting the way you choose to have the Dursleys continue to affect Harry, and I think it really fits.

    Author's Response: Thank you so much!  I appreciate your kind words and it's great to see someone reading and enjoying the story!
Title: Chapter 71 19 Jul 2015 5:12 pm
Reviewer: bootstring (Signed) [Report This]
    I love happy Christmas chapters.

    Author's Response: Oh, thank you.  Me, too.
Title: Chapter 29 04 Feb 2015 12:07 am
Reviewer: Nicole (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I just got back on here a today (with the site being down all of January) and I remembered reading your story. I never got to leave a review, so here it is. I haven't read the entire story yet, but I'm already completely in love with this, and it's one of my favorite fanfics. I love Severus's character development, especially how his feelings have chnaged towards Harry. This story was written amazingly, and everything actually seemed realistic, with him gradually changing. You're a fantastic writer :)

    Author's Response: I'm sorry I've taken so long to reply.  I'm not on the site as often as I used to be, but thank you so much for such a kind and thoughtful review.  I'm glad that you're enjoying the story.  
Title: Chapter 29 19 Jul 2014 6:39 pm
Reviewer: crotia (Signed) [Report This]
    aw, cute

    Author's Response: Thanks!
Title: Chapter 24 23 May 2014 7:12 pm
Reviewer: crotia (Signed) [Report This]
    I love this kind of moments
Title: Chapter 16 27 Apr 2014 1:51 pm
Reviewer: crotia (Signed) [Report This]
    aw, so cute
Title: Chapter 14 27 Apr 2014 12:56 pm
Reviewer: crotia (Signed) [Report This]
    I love your story

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