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Title: Chapter 45 15 Jun 2009 2:06 am
Reviewer: LMC (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Excellent, thank you for another wonderful chapter - keep up the amazing work! xxx

    Author's Response: Thank you so much!   I appreciate it.
Title: Chapter 45 14 Jun 2009 10:37 am
Reviewer: mithrilandtj (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww, Sev is singing. So he can be a softy after all.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Yes, Severus has softened up a lot towards Harry, hasn't he?
Title: Chapter 45 13 Jun 2009 10:12 pm
Reviewer: buchling (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Snape doesn't take the spell into consideration at all. I don't understand how he can be that oblivious about it. His behaviour is downright cruel.The punishment is way to harsh: To deprive him of his friends, his most valued posessions,revoke any given trust and on top of that not to give a time frame is - under these circumstances - plain abusive. And anyway he could just have given Harry some extra pepper up or anti-cold potion intstead of denying him the game.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you so much for your thoughtful comments.  I had hoped with this situation to have a conflict where there was some right and wrong on both sides, and where both characters' feelings and motivations could be sympathetic, or at least understandable.  I'm sorry you think Severus is abusive here...I don't think he is being abusive (and he certainly does not intend to be), but he is perhaps being too harsh.  Harry and Severus still have some things to talk about here, such as exactly why Harry needed to play so badly, how Quidditch and flying make him feel free and how much it means to his feelings about his self-worth.  I think Severus will realize that perhaps he was a bit harsh and he will relent on certain parts.

    And yes, the whole conflict might have been avoided with some potion or other, but that wouldn't have made for a very interesting situation.  I guess I sacrificed a bit of logic for the plot, lol. 

Title: Chapter 45 13 Jun 2009 5:15 pm
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww poor Harry, at least he knows now why he should listen to his guardian lol, sweet moment at the end with Severus climbing in with Harry so that he could be there when he wakes :)

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I loved that part at the end, too!
Title: Chapter 45 13 Jun 2009 2:16 pm
Reviewer: Chandramas (Signed) [Report This]
    This chapter is really very very sweet!!! I love Severus doubts as father. I can wait for them to talk. I hope Harry will realize Severus is singing him lullaby, it's the cutest thing I can imagine from him.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Yeah, I think just about all parents have doubts sometimes, and yeah, they still need to talk about some things.  Glad you liked the ending!
Title: Chapter 45 13 Jun 2009 6:42 am
Reviewer: JolisGSD (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor Harry! and poor Severus! I hope Harry will share some of his feelings of inferiority with Severus. Perhaps then Severus can help Harry heal and he will surely understand better why Harry disobeyed.

    Great chapter!

    Author's Response: Thank you so much!  And you're exactly right; Severus does know that Harry deals with feelings of inferiority but he doesn't understand yet how playing Quidditch ties in with that.  They're going to discuss that in the next chapter and they will come to understand one another better.  Thanks again! 
Title: Chapter 45 13 Jun 2009 3:36 am
Reviewer: jessirose85 (Signed) [Report This]
    Severus is really getting the hang of parenting which is good xx

    Great chapter

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Oh, Severus would really appreciate that, because he's feeling a lot of doubt and guilt right now.   
Title: Chapter 45 12 Jun 2009 9:55 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, by the way, FANTASTIC CHAPTER!!!!

    Loved everything about it, and loved the mush at the end.

    Author's Response: Thank you, Pandora!  Glad you liked it.
Title: Chapter 45 12 Jun 2009 9:53 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    I hope that Harry has learnt his lesson after all this. Poor kid, but he deserves the punishment, but I'm glad that Severus forgives him.

    Author's Response: Thanks, Pandora.  I think Harry shouldn't get off scot-free, but I do think Severus might have been a little harsh.  I can say that Harry does feel really terrible about it all and that he is determined to never let Severus down again, or at least try his best not to.  
Title: Chapter 44 05 Jun 2009 4:57 pm
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    Oooh maybe there will be an update here too? y'know, one of my favourite stories because its so brilliantly written and this chapter ended on a cliffe...hehe does flattery get anywhere? :P

    Author's Response: Thank you so much!  I'll try!

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