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Reviews For Slave Child
Author's Response: Thank you! Yes, Draco has a lot building up inside him right now, more than anyone knows...and he is very upset and frustrated, which may not be a good thing.
Author's Response: Thank you, Kim! I'm glad you like the scene with the Gryffindor boys. Yes, I think, even if they try to be understanding for Harry's sake, that his new relationship with Severus would be difficult for them. For so long, Harry and Severus were such enemies, and Severus still isn't very nice to the others, though he is trying at least not to make personal attacks. And yes, one great thing about writing your own story is that you can make anything happen that you want and I want so badly for Harry to have the support and the love that he didn't really have in canon.
Author's Response: Thank you! Glad you like it! Do you mean the little toddler boy that Harry saved when Voldie attacked Diagon Alley? He is reunited with his parents and living happily in anonymity, lol.
Author's Response: Thank you! Yes, I will put more about what happened with Draco in the next chapters, and Alec is okay, just bruised and shaken.
An interesting theory about the slave spell--will it actually be the culprit (or is it something subconcious in Harry?) Looking forward to more! V. Author's Response: Oh, thank you! I'm glad you like the theory about the slavery spell, but I'm afraid I can't answer it yet...it would give away major plot points to come, lol.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so happy you like it. More about Malfoy over the next few chapters!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. Yes, Draco was about to step in. He's angry and hurt that Alec has taken his spot, so he was sort of blustering around being a bully, but he wasn't going to actually take it to a physical level. Crabbe just got carried away (a shark scenting blood comes to mind).
Poor Morland. I'm glad Harry was there to help him, though it looked like maybe he didn't need help since Draco didn't seem to be his usual nasty self. Maybe he really has learned something from all this. Can't wait to see what's next and I'd like to learn more about Draco. Thanks! Author's Response: Thank you so much, Tabitha! Yeah, the Slytherin issue is kind of tricky. The truth is that right now there are a lot of bad seeds in Slytherin. Quite a few of them come from DE families, and if not actual DEs, a lot have families that do believe in pureblood supremacy. It's like a poisonous root in Slytherin, from the time Tom Riddle was there (maybe even further back what with Salazar Slytherin's basilisk), and even with Voldie gone, it's still going to take a while before it all dies out. Like Hermione said, the troubles go back for years and it's not going to smooth out overnight. Still, there are some good Slytherins and it's not right to be prejudiced against everyone from that House. I suppose the best way is to treat everyone as an individual, but as Ron said, watch your step until you know them. Maybe Draco is beginning to learn something, or maybe he's just afraid of being expelled, hmm. I am trying to get to more of his story, but I don't want to rush it...we will get there eventually, though, promise.
I was so glad to see that you'd posted. So is Malfoy really watching his step? Interesting. Poor Harry, it must be so frustrating for him to have these restrictions on him constantly and to have the Slavery spell affect every aspect of his life. I can't wait for your next update! Yippeeee! :) Author's Response: Oh, thank you! I certainly hope the writer's block is over! Yes, poor Harry, it is frustrating. Even though Severus is so good with him and in most of the practical ways, Harry's life is very good now, I think the emotional aspect of it, just knowing that he is a slave, is very hard and always will be. And I am soooo eager for another chapter of "An Uncertain Future", too! Look's like we'll both be busy, lol!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! As for your theory about Harry, Sev, and Draco...hmmm, that's pretty interesting. And you're right...Lucius and Narcissa wouldn't win any Parent of the Year awards. |
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