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Title: Chapter 41 23 Mar 2009 2:01 am
Reviewer: Doc Brown (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Omg, I read all of the fic in one day, and words "one giant hugfest" come to mind somehow *g*

    Author's Response: Yeah, I do like mush, lol!
Title: Chapter 41 12 Mar 2009 1:12 pm
Reviewer: Amanda Burke (Anonymous) [Report This]
    great story so far. i look forward to read more soon.

    Author's Response: Thank you!
Title: Chapter 41 09 Mar 2009 6:53 pm
Reviewer: b_e_skrewt (Signed) [Report This]
    difficult conversation for harry and severus... makes me wonder if it was also a hard chapter to write ;-)

    Author's Response: Thank you...and yes, it was!
Title: Chapter 41 07 Mar 2009 2:29 am
Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) [Report This]
    what a great chapter, sev was a great source of comfort when harry blew up at him, harry did well in his second explaination and it seems sev has taken on board what harry said

    Author's Response: Thank you!
Title: Chapter 41 03 Mar 2009 5:09 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Yippeee!!! You updated!

    I thought you did a really great, realistic job on the conversation about the way that Severus treated the Gryffindors I could really see Severus becoming defensive over Harry's complaints, and then settling down and considering them. Nice job as usual!

    I can't wait for your next update!

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I'm glad you approve.  I had a time writing Severus in this chapter so I'm happy it worked.  And I can't wait for your next chapter either! 
Title: Chapter 41 03 Mar 2009 12:53 pm
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    Awww I do love how Harry gets a temper going and Severus is always there for him, too cute, I also love how they want to do things together as father and son : )

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Yeah, Harry can have a bit of a temper, though in this case I do think he's right...Severus is unfair to the Gryffindors and especially harsh with Neville who doesn't deserve it.  But he didn't broach the matter in the smartest way at first.  But his headache was bothering him so maybe that's partially an excuse.  Once he calmed down and was more reasonable...and maybe more 'Slytherin' in getting his point across, he had more success.  Thanks again!   
Title: Chapter 41 03 Mar 2009 5:42 am
Reviewer: cckeimig (Signed) [Report This]
    Good chapter! It'll be interesting to see what happens at the Slytherin tryouts!!!

    Author's Response: Thank you!
Title: Chapter 41 03 Mar 2009 5:41 am
Reviewer: studiohq (Signed) [Report This]
    That must have been a hard chapter to do, keeping Severus in character yet getting him to be a bit fairer.

    Great job as always!

    Author's Response: Thank you!  And yes, Severus was a challenge here.  Glad you liked it! 
Title: Chapter 40 01 Mar 2009 7:59 am
Reviewer: xxslytheringirlxx (Signed) [Report This]
    love this story , i cant wait untill the next chapter
    keep up the good work
    SG

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Ch. 41 is with my beta now so hopefully it'll be up soon!
Title: Chapter 24 28 Feb 2009 10:30 pm
Reviewer: xxslytheringirlxx (Signed) [Report This]
    oh my goodness
    this chapter made me cry my eyes out
    and the one before, its just soo sad
    i love the story
    SG

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I'm so happy you like it!

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