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Title: Chapter 39 31 Jan 2009 12:39 pm
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    Awww loved the 'detention' for the trio, I cant believe that Draco and co attacked Harry and co like that! what is that boy thinking! I cant remember, does Draco know that Harry is a slave by his spell? I dont think he does but its been a while since he cast it lol : )

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Well, I don't think Draco is thinking very clearly just now.  No, Draco doesn't know that Harry is a slave at this point.  Glad you liked the 'detention', lol.
Title: Chapter 39 31 Jan 2009 6:51 am
Reviewer: nairobidawn (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Excellent! I wonder what's going on with Draco. He seemed more like himself this chapter but he is still acting weird...anyway, please continue!

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Draco's story is coming up in a few more chapters...something big has happened to him, but right now he still hates Harry, even more now that he's realizing that Severus is on Harry's side now.
Title: Chapter 38 21 Jan 2009 5:04 am
Reviewer: studiohq (Signed) [Report This]
    I just can't dig up any sympathy for Draco...I'm trying but...I got this thing...about slavery...no matter how comfortable it is...your still a nobody in a gilded cage....so

    To bad so sad for Draco...

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Well, I do think slavery is a terrible thing, too, but to be fair, Draco did not know what the spell was.  Of course he should have given it a little more thought before deciding to cast an unknown spell, but kids do sometimes do things, very serious things, without thinking through the consequences.  Also Draco did say that the other spells he'd learned from that book were things that could be cleared up quickly so I don't think he believed the spell would have serious permanent consequences for Harry.  He actually was a little shaken up back in chapter 2 when he thought he might have killed or really hurt Harry.  All that being said, Draco certainly has his flaws and he has lots of room to grow.
Title: Chapter 38 21 Jan 2009 1:01 am
Reviewer: Inu Chan (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I am liking this story much more than I initially thought I would, when I first saw that it had to do with slavery. I'm eager to find out what's going on with Draco.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I'm glad you're enjoying it.  Draco's story will probably be up in about 2 more chapters.
Title: Chapter 38 20 Jan 2009 3:31 pm
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed) [Report This]
    Yeah! Another Chapter! And a good one too!

    Harry has chosen a tough line to walk--be open to Slytherins who aren't "jr. death eaters" and be wary of the rest. I'm glad Ron and Hermionie are watching out for him. Not that many can out-do our Harry in the air, but a "sharp-shooter" could do serious damage to him from the ground.

    Looking forward to your next update!

    V.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Yes, Harry better learn to juggle pretty quickly, lol.  And yeah, he might need some back up before it's over.
Title: Chapter 38 20 Jan 2009 4:43 am
Reviewer: toast (Signed) [Report This]
    that was great i love reading about how Sev and Harry interact

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I love Harry and Severus together.
Title: Chapter 38 20 Jan 2009 3:05 am
Reviewer: Verdad y Vida (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Heh heh, being an evil individual, I am hoping that something very exciting will happen...however, I want Harry to have a chance to help Alec Morland first. :D No pressure, though—I'm sure I'll enjoy it in any case. Great chapter!

    Author's Response: Thanks!  I'll do my best!
Title: Chapter 38 20 Jan 2009 1:56 am
Reviewer: La Mariane (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oh! I wonder what Draco is up to... and I hope the flying session with Alec Morland goes well too, otherwise things could turn ugly between Slytherin and the rest of the scool.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Well, Alec Morland is all right, but it might be time for Draco to make another appearance, hmm? 
Title: Chapter 38 20 Jan 2009 1:22 am
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    Cool first day, I love that Bill is teaching DADA, he would be such a cool teacher lol Im really intrigued to know what Draco's story is though, I know you are getting to it lol

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I think Bill could be a good teacher too.  As for Draco, he has something going on, probably another couple chapters before it comes out. 
Title: Chapter 38 19 Jan 2009 11:40 pm
Reviewer: Poirot (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter! It's good to see Ron Hermione & Severus all put Harry's safety first!

    Author's Response: Thank you!   

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