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Title: Chapter 37 19 Jan 2009 11:04 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Having trouble with my net at home, so I have to read this lovely story at work, and there is not much time to enjoy it! :(

    But you know I love, and I'm sorry if I missed reviewing any chapters.

    Author's Response:

    Hey, Pandora,

    Sorry you're having troube with the net (does this mean we're not going to have another chapter of "Uncertain Future" anytime soon?  *Cries*).  Thanks for reviewing!  

     

Title: Chapter 38 19 Jan 2009 9:48 pm
Reviewer: Morgansnape87 (Signed) [Report This]
    keep it up

    Author's Response: Thanks!  I'll try!
Title: Chapter 38 19 Jan 2009 8:15 pm
Reviewer: KimSpiritTalks (Signed) [Report This]
    Wonderful chapter, Kristeh! I loved the descriptions of the classes, especially. It sounded like they were having fun and learning, too, which is what Hogwarts is all about, in my mind. Hermione and Ron being suspicious of Slytherin is also good because I think that they would be and I think that it adds to the realism and suspense. Very good!

    Author's Response: Thanks, Kim!  I'm glad you liked the classes...I struggled with them a bit, but I wanted to include them because I like all the little details, plus I'm hoping to show Severus growing as an instructor too.  I don't think he quite believes that is possible for the students to learn and enjoy themselves at the same time.  And yes, I think Ron and Hermione would be suspicious of the Slytherins too.  For one thing, the enmity between the two Houses is entrenched.  For another, they do have valid reasons for being suspicious.  Some of the kids in Slytherin are all right, but there are some nasty characters there, too.  I want to have Slytherin House be redeemed somewhat, at least to the point where the kids are not all judged simply by their House association and I want to have some 'good' Slytherins.  But as Hermione said, they're not all poor misunderstood innocents either.  And maybe not all of them can or want to be redeemed.  Thanks again!
Title: Chapter 37 13 Jan 2009 6:40 pm
Reviewer: Poirot (Signed) [Report This]
    Thanks for another great chapter! Can't wait for the next update.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Glad you liked it!
Title: Chapter 37 11 Jan 2009 5:51 pm
Reviewer: tabbycat (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww. Poor Draco! love Hermione and Ron's relationship. (:

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I always do enjoy writing Hermione and Ron, too. 
Title: Chapter 35 11 Jan 2009 5:39 pm
Reviewer: tabbycat (Signed) [Report This]
    Looking forward to finding out about Fred and George's gift! Reminds me of James Bond and Q...
Title: Chapter 37 11 Jan 2009 4:09 pm
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    great chappie! i've loved the summer but have been looking forward to seeing how things go now that they are all back at Hogwarts, hope you can update soon! : )

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Being back at Hogwarts brings a whole new dynamic to the story, I think.  I'll try to update again soon. 
Title: Chapter 37 11 Jan 2009 3:52 pm
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed) [Report This]
    :-) Yeah! An update!

    Wonderful chapter as ususal. Now, I can't help but wonder what type of trobule Draco is going to cause. (There is always the chance that he could learn from this and become a better person. . . ) I can't see him taking his punishment well, even though he earned it-more than earned it. Has he had time to figure it out? Did he muster up the courage to ask Lucius about it before the final confrontation?

    I'm also currious about how potions will go.

    Looking forward to your next update!
    V.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Now, what gives you the idea that sweet little Draco is going to cause any trouble, lol?  But yes, you're right.  He's not taking his punishment well.  We'll see more of him in the next chapter, I think.  
Title: Chapter 37 11 Jan 2009 2:58 pm
Reviewer: La Mariane (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I'm glad you updated SC :)
    I really liked the scene with Alec Morland, and I'm looking forward to the flying session with the younger Slytherin!

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I hope the next few chapters will be fun.  They're probably not going to be terribly exciting or angsty, but I look at them as building blocks. 
Title: Chapter 37 11 Jan 2009 11:39 am
Reviewer: toast (Signed) [Report This]
    awwww that was cute

    Author's Response: Thank you! 

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