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Title: Chapter 32 27 Oct 2008 2:08 am
Reviewer: Mysterious Jedi (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Did Harry remember to leave a note?

    Author's Response: Thank you!  No, he forgot the note.
Title: Chapter 32 26 Oct 2008 6:06 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    Snape is unusually talkative and open.
    I hope that Harry won't get kidnapped. Mila

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Well, Severus was rather talkative, but he's comfortable with Harry by this point and he thought it would help Harry to know more about his own past.  No, Harry isn't going to get kidnapped, not at this point anyway!
Title: Chapter 32 26 Oct 2008 11:35 am
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    Yay more! as always I loved the chapter, there's nothing quite like Harry/Severus fluffy hugs : )
    Did Harry just leave without leaving a note though?? ooh... lol

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Yep, Harry forgot the note all right...
Title: Chapter 32 26 Oct 2008 11:01 am
Reviewer: Nakago (Signed) [Report This]
    What?! Harry forgot to write a note for Severus?! Oh Harry... Severus will be terrified when he will be back and Harry will not be there, I think. I really wonder what Severus will do then.

    OK, this chapter is really interesting. We know more about Severus' family - I've always wondered why Eilleen married Tobias. I thought maybe she was really in love... That happens. But your version is also likely.

    And I like that Harry finally told Severus about Dursley's. It's high time.

    So... I'me waiting for more. As always ;-).

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Yes, Severus will be worried and sometimes worry can come out as anger...ask any parent.  I'm glad you like Severus' background so far.  There may well be more to Eileen and Tobias than Severus understood, too, but that won't come out until much later, probably the sequel.  And yes, it probably was time for Harry to talk about the Dursleys.  Perhaps having the adoption papers and a real dad helped him a bit with that. 
Title: Chapter 32 26 Oct 2008 6:51 am
Reviewer: dancegirl01mom (Signed) [Report This]
    Loved the chapter...and i see trouble brewing when Sev finds Harry not in their quarters since he didn't leave a note....

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Yes, Severus will be a tad worried when he can't find Harry.
Title: Chapter 32 26 Oct 2008 6:02 am
Reviewer: ObsessiveaboutSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    eeeerrrr.....Wasn't he supposed to leave a note....???
    Very good chapter. I can't wait to read more!!

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Yep, he was supposed to leave that note. 
Title: Chapter 32 26 Oct 2008 3:40 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oooh, Harry didn't do as he was told, did he? He left their quarters without writing a note to Severus. Severus will not be pleased, I would imagine!

    I just love that Harry & Sev's relationship has come so far. Please update soon, I love this story!

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I love the relationship between Harry and Severus, too.  And no, Severus will not be happy that Harry forgot the note.
Title: Chapter 31 23 Oct 2008 5:34 am
Reviewer: ObsessiveaboutSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow! Here i thought this was going to be some sordid story about slavery and pain and all that other gloomy stuff, but this was really nice. I'm sorry I took so logn to read it. I hope you'll update soon, and I really should do the same. VEry good.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I'm very happy you gave "Slave Child" a try and are enjoying it!
Title: Chapter 31 13 Oct 2008 11:41 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    *likes to see Harry happy*

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I like to see Harry happy, too! 
Title: Chapter 31 13 Oct 2008 9:53 pm
Reviewer: sunsethill (Signed) [Report This]
    ""Well, you had to have a place to sleep. Or did you think I would simply stick you in my potions cabinet at night?" Severus said lightly." This was a good way for Severus to begin learning a little about what Harry's life was like before. I sometimes forget that in your world, Severus comes to change his mind about Harry without really knowing all about his treatment at the hands of the Dursleys.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Yes, Severus does know that Harry was mistreated, but he doesn't know all the details yet.  That's going to change though.  Now that Harry trusts him, he is beginning to open up.  Thanks again!

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